for Shattered Roses12/29/2005 c1 
55ronshaberry
Ah, curse fictionpress and all its double-spacedness. No, wait. Don't. Good job. Totally ethereal sense to it - must be the ice and the roses. Just a lovely piece, it has a lilt to it. Hn. Good.
If you're wondering how I got here, it's pianomaestra. Yeah, like that matters.
The second stanza was slightly awkward. It surprised me that the girl was crying. And that her hand was shaking. But that's just me.
55ronshaberryAh, curse fictionpress and all its double-spacedness. No, wait. Don't. Good job. Totally ethereal sense to it - must be the ice and the roses. Just a lovely piece, it has a lilt to it. Hn. Good.
If you're wondering how I got here, it's pianomaestra. Yeah, like that matters.
The second stanza was slightly awkward. It surprised me that the girl was crying. And that her hand was shaking. But that's just me.
2/6/2005 c1 1pianomaestra
Oh God...please do not tell me you got this from science...oi...awesome poem though, like usual. Great message...damn, you are so good at this. Great job.
1pianomaestraOh God...please do not tell me you got this from science...oi...awesome poem though, like usual. Great message...damn, you are so good at this. Great job.
2/2/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Love it. Love the seeminly random violence; though it has its purpose. Brilliant.
194Aslan IsraelLove it. Love the seeminly random violence; though it has its purpose. Brilliant.
2/1/2005 c1 11midnight dreams
That was extremely vivid for me. Nice work. Going to my faves. ^_^
PS. Thank you for your review. Quite shocking. I haven't been here for years. Hee.
11midnight dreamsThat was extremely vivid for me. Nice work. Going to my faves. ^_^
PS. Thank you for your review. Quite shocking. I haven't been here for years. Hee.
2/1/2005 c1 6purplemuffin
little did anyone know that this poem was inspired by our evil science teacher... its good... but somehow i really am not liking it since it is a direct reference to ms. sailor... even if its really 'just someone in a parallel dimension doing the same thing as ms. sailor'... nice try quid :P
6purplemuffinlittle did anyone know that this poem was inspired by our evil science teacher... its good... but somehow i really am not liking it since it is a direct reference to ms. sailor... even if its really 'just someone in a parallel dimension doing the same thing as ms. sailor'... nice try quid :P
2/1/2005 c1 12ithinkcupidsjusttakingtheps
wow this is beautiful, the symbol of the roses is very strong. Very powerful imagery, wish i could write like that.
12ithinkcupidsjusttakingthepswow this is beautiful, the symbol of the roses is very strong. Very powerful imagery, wish i could write like that.