for God is Someone in love2/1/2005 c1 
2philoslove
Somehow, to me... this poem still doesn't justify why God is Someone in Love. You write "I know because If I were He...", but then you aren't. Okay, pardon me if I sound awfully stupid or offensive.
I love the imagery, the dancing clouds near the empyrean. Lovely! Though I think if it was longer, it would have been lovelier.
2philosloveSomehow, to me... this poem still doesn't justify why God is Someone in Love. You write "I know because If I were He...", but then you aren't. Okay, pardon me if I sound awfully stupid or offensive.
I love the imagery, the dancing clouds near the empyrean. Lovely! Though I think if it was longer, it would have been lovelier.