
8/31/2009 c2 melissa
you really should continue the story its good so far but let see what happens
you really should continue the story its good so far but let see what happens
10/8/2005 c1 DarkLord89
very interesting...i would have more dialouge...but i like ur style of writing- VERY GOOD
very interesting...i would have more dialouge...but i like ur style of writing- VERY GOOD