for Dangerous Type6/27/2009 c11 Crimsonlotus
I HOPE U UPDATE SOON...i kinda dont like gracie 4 some reason ...i dont know why ...?
I HOPE U UPDATE SOON...i kinda dont like gracie 4 some reason ...i dont know why ...?
12/26/2005 c10 Melody
I love Gracie! I wish someone would ask her! Great story so far! Ok, continuing...
I love Gracie! I wish someone would ask her! Great story so far! Ok, continuing...
11/26/2005 c11 
1littleXember
lol. cool story. a lot of mixed emotions and the stage changes fast. can't wait til' the next one..
1littleXemberlol. cool story. a lot of mixed emotions and the stage changes fast. can't wait til' the next one..
7/2/2005 c11 1Shyin
Sry, it took so long for me to review! Anyway, I like the chapter! And I miss Randy!
1ShyinSry, it took so long for me to review! Anyway, I like the chapter! And I miss Randy!
7/1/2005 c11 just no one
Hi! What a great story! Wow! Hope Randy and Moira stay together! Lovely! Update soon!
Hi! What a great story! Wow! Hope Randy and Moira stay together! Lovely! Update soon!
6/30/2005 c11 Sydney
Heya! About time! I loved this chapter since Moira sort of rekindled her friendship, even without meaning to! As for the prom, why don't you do something from the sixties? Our school did that a couple years ago, and I thought it was kind of cool. *shrug* whatever. uPdate soon!
Heya! About time! I loved this chapter since Moira sort of rekindled her friendship, even without meaning to! As for the prom, why don't you do something from the sixties? Our school did that a couple years ago, and I thought it was kind of cool. *shrug* whatever. uPdate soon!
6/29/2005 c11 4lindserly
It's about time you updated, I was beginning to think you'd abandoned the story!
Anyway prom themes... well my first prom was "A Night at the Oscars" and that was cool. And then another prom I went to with a bf at his school had a greek theme. And my second prom (OAC, i'm in canada, last year of the OACs was I) was "A night in Paris", wasn't so fond of that one. Thy ehad a replica Eiffel tower and that was cool tho. My sister just had hers and it was a twenties theme. I think that sounded cool.
4lindserlyIt's about time you updated, I was beginning to think you'd abandoned the story!
Anyway prom themes... well my first prom was "A Night at the Oscars" and that was cool. And then another prom I went to with a bf at his school had a greek theme. And my second prom (OAC, i'm in canada, last year of the OACs was I) was "A night in Paris", wasn't so fond of that one. Thy ehad a replica Eiffel tower and that was cool tho. My sister just had hers and it was a twenties theme. I think that sounded cool.
6/28/2005 c11 Dazed
Hi! You finally updated! ^_^ I thought this chapter was really good even if Randy wasn't in it. She's conncted with her friends in a way! Hope you update soon!
Hi! You finally updated! ^_^ I thought this chapter was really good even if Randy wasn't in it. She's conncted with her friends in a way! Hope you update soon!
6/26/2005 c11 8Goddess Cytherea
Wow! Great story so far. Loved the way how you wrote it. Its kinda realistic when you think of it. The way how our relationships begin. I wonder how they're gonna go to the prom.
Though, most stories end with happily ever after. Why not make it a little original. Say, Randy only wanted to make his ex. jealous, and he never really loved Moira. Then again, that would be kinda mean. That's only my opinion for the next chapter or so. Keep writing!
*From chapter 1-2 there are some spelling mistakes. Ex: "feat" I think you meant "feet"
8Goddess CythereaWow! Great story so far. Loved the way how you wrote it. Its kinda realistic when you think of it. The way how our relationships begin. I wonder how they're gonna go to the prom.
Though, most stories end with happily ever after. Why not make it a little original. Say, Randy only wanted to make his ex. jealous, and he never really loved Moira. Then again, that would be kinda mean. That's only my opinion for the next chapter or so. Keep writing!
*From chapter 1-2 there are some spelling mistakes. Ex: "feat" I think you meant "feet"
6/26/2005 c11 2sweetXsurrender
Hello!
that was a great chapter, I really don't mind if the chapters are short, they are still awesome! Keep up the good work, and I really don't know a prom idea, sorry, never been to one!
2sweetXsurrenderHello!
that was a great chapter, I really don't mind if the chapters are short, they are still awesome! Keep up the good work, and I really don't know a prom idea, sorry, never been to one!
5/13/2005 c10 17Lady of romance world88
Wow!Moira and Randy must be perfect match. I wonder what happened after one week auction? Wow luckily for Randy's aunt. His aunt was very nice to Moira. Hurry update soon.
17Lady of romance world88Wow!Moira and Randy must be perfect match. I wonder what happened after one week auction? Wow luckily for Randy's aunt. His aunt was very nice to Moira. Hurry update soon.
4/29/2005 c10 Sydney
Hey, awesome update! So prom will be really weird, with Randy's broken leg and everything. But hopefully they'll work on it. Ooh, i can't wait for the update! Please make it soon! :P
Hey, awesome update! So prom will be really weird, with Randy's broken leg and everything. But hopefully they'll work on it. Ooh, i can't wait for the update! Please make it soon! :P