for Blue skies5/26/2005 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
How do you write so much in so little? could you take me as an apprentice? please? I love your writing style!
88Icthoid Matro CoselosHow do you write so much in so little? could you take me as an apprentice? please? I love your writing style!
3/9/2005 c1 7gingerbeer
Wow, the singsong feeling and repetition made me think of when I was little and playing with my friends. Very pretty!
7gingerbeerWow, the singsong feeling and repetition made me think of when I was little and playing with my friends. Very pretty!
2/21/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
Gentle, uplifting and has a good solid feel to it. One of your best pieces I have read yet. Your use of repetition was good too, because of the short length of the poem and how you tied each line in.
219Matthew James CurrentGentle, uplifting and has a good solid feel to it. One of your best pieces I have read yet. Your use of repetition was good too, because of the short length of the poem and how you tied each line in.
2/19/2005 c1 94born-again
So good! Ilove those first lines: "Blue skies means us,laughing after the rain of sorrow has gone."
94born-againSo good! Ilove those first lines: "Blue skies means us,laughing after the rain of sorrow has gone."
2/16/2005 c1 107Lover-of-Heartbreak
The poem is good but I think you could do better be altering the ending lines..."The song in my heart, You have heard." seems out of place to me. Keep the Blue skies... theme going.
107Lover-of-HeartbreakThe poem is good but I think you could do better be altering the ending lines..."The song in my heart, You have heard." seems out of place to me. Keep the Blue skies... theme going.
2/15/2005 c1 7The System Mother
Nice work. ^_^ Teh heh, I like it.
Yeah, that wasn't one of my best... trying to work on rhyme. Lol. Thanks for the review anyways ^_^
7The System MotherNice work. ^_^ Teh heh, I like it.
Yeah, that wasn't one of my best... trying to work on rhyme. Lol. Thanks for the review anyways ^_^
2/3/2005 c1 241Werewolf Nighteyes
Beautiful. This was your second? God... Well it took me some time to actually get out a real decent poem. Keep on writing! You've got talent!
241Werewolf NighteyesBeautiful. This was your second? God... Well it took me some time to actually get out a real decent poem. Keep on writing! You've got talent!
2/3/2005 c1 87Obsidian Eyes
Really beautiful. Great repetition! And only your second poem? If you have the time, please review my 40th, it's called "lost" I hope to read more of your work soon- Write On
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87Obsidian EyesReally beautiful. Great repetition! And only your second poem? If you have the time, please review my 40th, it's called "lost" I hope to read more of your work soon- Write On
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