for Vampires Light4/3/2005 c4 Clandestine Amor
I love this chapter. Keep up the good work with the story and i cant wait to see what happens next.
I love this chapter. Keep up the good work with the story and i cant wait to see what happens next.
2/28/2005 c1 Miss Yukishiro
Wow! What's going to happen next? This guy sounds weird...I wonder what Wil lhappen? Great job on this chapter! (Maybe you could go read my fic? Please?) Ja Ne!
Wow! What's going to happen next? This guy sounds weird...I wonder what Wil lhappen? Great job on this chapter! (Maybe you could go read my fic? Please?) Ja Ne!
2/26/2005 c1 
2Christine Bahrens
This story sounds very pormising, and perhaps more would read if you made the summary a little more clearer. It appears a bit jumbled, and could use some revising :)
2Christine BahrensThis story sounds very pormising, and perhaps more would read if you made the summary a little more clearer. It appears a bit jumbled, and could use some revising :)
2/4/2005 c1 42Firefly of the Cosmos
There was some spelling and grammer u might want to fix. but other than that they story was quite good and I wish for you to continue on with it!
P.S.-if u may have the time I can u please read and review my work, thanks if ya do?
42Firefly of the CosmosThere was some spelling and grammer u might want to fix. but other than that they story was quite good and I wish for you to continue on with it!
P.S.-if u may have the time I can u please read and review my work, thanks if ya do?