for Over You2/26/2005 c1 Story-Teller's Aide
wow! I really like that one! My favourite one so far! It just says so much...
wow! I really like that one! My favourite one so far! It just says so much...
2/9/2005 c1 
148Thyrt
aw..that's really sad..good though, it's also how i've been feeling lately about my recent crush..
148Thyrtaw..that's really sad..good though, it's also how i've been feeling lately about my recent crush..
2/8/2005 c1 19Leader of the Mushroom Militia
Hmm, the first half was good but the second seemed a little cut, like there should be something more to it. Like something was missing... yah, cool poem anyway.
19Leader of the Mushroom MilitiaHmm, the first half was good but the second seemed a little cut, like there should be something more to it. Like something was missing... yah, cool poem anyway.
2/4/2005 c1 20CaptainJerkFace
I enjoy the theme of this poem. I'm not too sure how well the flow works throughout the whole thing, however. Word choice is okay, except that it struck me as odd how at the very begining two of the first three lines rhyme. "Here" and "hear," I expected it to be setting up a rhyme sceme that never happened. The bits of dialouge were nice, but seemed a bit out of place. I think I actually enjoyed the dialouge bits the most, though. This is all just personal opinion and observation, however. Overall it was a nice poem and a fairly strong piece, but there is some room for improvement. Keep up the nice work. I enjoyed this poem.
20CaptainJerkFaceI enjoy the theme of this poem. I'm not too sure how well the flow works throughout the whole thing, however. Word choice is okay, except that it struck me as odd how at the very begining two of the first three lines rhyme. "Here" and "hear," I expected it to be setting up a rhyme sceme that never happened. The bits of dialouge were nice, but seemed a bit out of place. I think I actually enjoyed the dialouge bits the most, though. This is all just personal opinion and observation, however. Overall it was a nice poem and a fairly strong piece, but there is some room for improvement. Keep up the nice work. I enjoyed this poem.