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2/12/2006 c3 7huntress3484
Good chapter. I like a lot of scenes. Very nice how you showed that the gun wasn't real. Another chapter soon? Please?
2/8/2005 c2 huntress3484
Your story is great! I'm really interested. What did the uncle used to do for Otocorp? I can't wait untill you update. The only mistakes I can comment on are pretty tiny. Its is possesive and it's means it is. And in the second chapter you misspelled possibly but that was probably just a typo. Yous should keep writing. I know some people give more detailed review (and others less) but I can't think of anything else to say.

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