1/12/2006 c1 10tyro green horn
What you say is false.Why?"No longer does anyone think I’m beautiful"- is a lieTo me you are, for you write with your heart not your handWhoever left you might be the fool of foolsAnd yet you might not understand.
Good poem. Please continue to write.
What you say is false.Why?"No longer does anyone think I’m beautiful"- is a lieTo me you are, for you write with your heart not your handWhoever left you might be the fool of foolsAnd yet you might not understand.
Good poem. Please continue to write.
3/15/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
Sorry it happened...have felt the same way too...heartbreak is a bitch...but great poem! Keep on going!
Sorry it happened...have felt the same way too...heartbreak is a bitch...but great poem! Keep on going!
2/28/2005 c1 IsySynders
aww...i know how you feel...it's beaming with honesty and a subtle beauty...nice
aww...i know how you feel...it's beaming with honesty and a subtle beauty...nice
2/5/2005 c1 270dustytiger
i know exacly how you feel, i'm going thru the same thing myself, you expressed if very well, great job, thank you for sharing
i know exacly how you feel, i'm going thru the same thing myself, you expressed if very well, great job, thank you for sharing
2/5/2005 c1 M L
s'sad. Except the last line. It made me think of Asher from Laurell k Hamilton's Anita Blake novels.
s'sad. Except the last line. It made me think of Asher from Laurell k Hamilton's Anita Blake novels.