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3/8/2005 c3 2QuiEtXpeRfeCti0n
That was a really wonderful twist that you put on the story. This chaper is one of the best in my opinion. I also liked how you renamed each chapter, very creative names.
3/6/2005 c3 23Sweetly Sarcastic
whoa... You're first few chapters were a bit blah but this one was really cool. I can't wait until the next one.
2/17/2005 c1 Madelaine Strauss
Boring start. Didn't read to the end of it.

I didn't like the lazy way you're labelling chapters. I mean, if you're going to make them "chap1", "Chapter 2", at least spell them the same.
2/10/2005 c2 Sweetly Sarcastic
Short, but still good. If you could add alittle more inb the next chapter that would be cool. Other than the shortest, this rocked.*applause*
2/9/2005 c2 Anonymous
I love it. You are a really good writer and I hope you continue with this story, as well as your other ones.I like how your character is nameless so far, and I really enjoy the fact that you have given the reader a lot of the characters thoughts.Good luck, and I hope to see updates soon.
2/6/2005 c1 Sweetly Sarcastic
Interesting. It's cool that you didn't give her a namne because it added to the suspense. I look forward to future chapters. *applause*

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