for Cage2/14/2006 c20 
2tinkaleita
I love it. Its a brilliant fic and you don't just centre on one couple its all of them. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm adding you to my favorite list and author alert. Wher can i see the pics of the characters
2tinkaleitaI love it. Its a brilliant fic and you don't just centre on one couple its all of them. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm adding you to my favorite list and author alert. Wher can i see the pics of the characters
10/1/2005 c20 4jladotcom
haha. Riku's funny. "I want a hug, goddamit." hahaha. It was pretty short, but that's okay, just update again soon... yeah, it took me a LONG time to review... sorry about that.
4jladotcomhaha. Riku's funny. "I want a hug, goddamit." hahaha. It was pretty short, but that's okay, just update again soon... yeah, it took me a LONG time to review... sorry about that.
8/11/2005 c19 FairyOfDeath
YAY you finally updated! course all the chinese or whatnot names make my head spin but its cute, espesially sai and kaori, thats my favorite part
YAY you finally updated! course all the chinese or whatnot names make my head spin but its cute, espesially sai and kaori, thats my favorite part
8/11/2005 c19 5jacksy
hey, really enjoyed this chapter, thank god at least some of them got together lol, Toshi and Satoshi are so funny! lol keep it up! dv8ing
5jacksyhey, really enjoyed this chapter, thank god at least some of them got together lol, Toshi and Satoshi are so funny! lol keep it up! dv8ing
8/10/2005 c19 Katy
NOO grr
why'd you have to leave there
my favs are Sai and Kaori *grins and nods*
Update soon please...or else...dundundun...i might stab you with a spork...that reminds me...i need a spork
NOO grr
why'd you have to leave there
my favs are Sai and Kaori *grins and nods*
Update soon please...or else...dundundun...i might stab you with a spork...that reminds me...i need a spork
8/10/2005 c19 4jladotcom
haha! That was great! Satoshi and Toshi finally got together! That's so cute! Another great chapter! (and thanks for the pix, they were cool! And sorry about the reply, I was kind of... okay really out of it and I wasn't paying attention T_T.) Write more soon!
4jladotcomhaha! That was great! Satoshi and Toshi finally got together! That's so cute! Another great chapter! (and thanks for the pix, they were cool! And sorry about the reply, I was kind of... okay really out of it and I wasn't paying attention T_T.) Write more soon!
8/7/2005 c18 Shiny Penny
Holy cow I love your story so much! It is so good. And I want to thank you for using good grammar in your story. So many authors don't, and it gets really hard to read.
My favorite couple would have to be Satoshi and Toshi. You've done a great job with their characters. Even though Toshi is outwardly flirtatious, he's actually kind of nervous that Satoshi won't like him. And Satoshi, who's normally shyer, is becoming bolder when he's around Toshi. It works really well.
I can't really think of any criticisms. Just keep up the good work!
Holy cow I love your story so much! It is so good. And I want to thank you for using good grammar in your story. So many authors don't, and it gets really hard to read.
My favorite couple would have to be Satoshi and Toshi. You've done a great job with their characters. Even though Toshi is outwardly flirtatious, he's actually kind of nervous that Satoshi won't like him. And Satoshi, who's normally shyer, is becoming bolder when he's around Toshi. It works really well.
I can't really think of any criticisms. Just keep up the good work!
7/25/2005 c18 5jacksy
hey! wow this is really cool!, i felt like slapping some of the characters because they werent getting together, but it made the story interesting :D update soon! dv8ing
5jacksyhey! wow this is really cool!, i felt like slapping some of the characters because they werent getting together, but it made the story interesting :D update soon! dv8ing
7/22/2005 c18 4jladotcom
That was hilarious! I can't believe they just stayed laying in the hallway like that! Another awesome chapter. It didn't take long for you to update; I need to get back to work and put a up a few chapters of my own.
4jladotcomThat was hilarious! I can't believe they just stayed laying in the hallway like that! Another awesome chapter. It didn't take long for you to update; I need to get back to work and put a up a few chapters of my own.
7/20/2005 c17 twistedFAerieTALEs
luv! sry i havent been reviewing, busy summer *tear* but im glad u have time to write! update asap! ~Sage
luv! sry i havent been reviewing, busy summer *tear* but im glad u have time to write! update asap! ~Sage
7/20/2005 c17 4jladotcom
That was great! I would hate to get woken up by cold water, I feel sorry for Sai. My computer completely shut down for a little over a week about two weeks ago; I hate not having the internet- but I know how you feel. It better not take three weeks for the next chapter! XD
4jladotcomThat was great! I would hate to get woken up by cold water, I feel sorry for Sai. My computer completely shut down for a little over a week about two weeks ago; I hate not having the internet- but I know how you feel. It better not take three weeks for the next chapter! XD
6/18/2005 c16 11arachibutyrophobia
“Because I’ve already seen everything on you, why should I care anymore?” - that made me crack up. literally. When he said no, I was like, WHAT? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? but lol, i guess that's a good reason.
aw. they're so sweet. my fav couple/ well, actually, Saar and Jiuue. when he picked her up, i was like, "aw..." lol. ignore me. all this summer romance is getting to me.
update!
11arachibutyrophobia“Because I’ve already seen everything on you, why should I care anymore?” - that made me crack up. literally. When he said no, I was like, WHAT? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? but lol, i guess that's a good reason.
aw. they're so sweet. my fav couple/ well, actually, Saar and Jiuue. when he picked her up, i was like, "aw..." lol. ignore me. all this summer romance is getting to me.
update!