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8/19/2006 c1 53perpetual Audio
your very good at showing your emotion through words the repitition of the word "tears" amplifies this. great poem! adding to my favs.
2/9/2005 c1 37Bukowski Is
Look up the poem "Poetry" by Moore. If you find any meaning in it, you might be able to see exactly what I find wrong in your poem.
2/6/2005 c1 eggsbenni221
I like this. It's very "stream of consciousness" sounding. I think that a lot of people can relate to the feelings you describe here.
2/6/2005 c1 9Chalynka
wow.. I really like this because it almost portrays how I feel right now like a wound will never heal.. I also really like the emotion in this. great job
2/6/2005 c1 Blood Stained Sorceress
That was really good.

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