
7/25/2011 c1 The Wooden Manikin
This story is very well written. Honestly, it made me want to cry, and I almost did. The story captures the emotions of the character very clearly, and it really made me think.
This story is very well written. Honestly, it made me want to cry, and I almost did. The story captures the emotions of the character very clearly, and it really made me think.
3/13/2011 c1 lotus in summer
This is the most heartbreaking rape scene I have ever read, and that includes a few I've read in published books. Amazing job.
This is the most heartbreaking rape scene I have ever read, and that includes a few I've read in published books. Amazing job.
2/2/2010 c1
6letyoursoultakeflight
Aww, this is incredibly sad, my heart just goes out to him. I hate how horrid people can be... perfectly captured!

Aww, this is incredibly sad, my heart just goes out to him. I hate how horrid people can be... perfectly captured!
6/1/2008 c1
1Kneecap
It was poignant and moving. I liked it ^^.
It was obvious, a torubling topic, and I think you dealt with it well :D. This is probably the shortest review I'v ever written, BUT AT LEAST I DID REVIEW! (Unlike some little buggers...*stares in a paranoid fashion at no one in particular*).
But yeah, 'twas ace :D.

It was poignant and moving. I liked it ^^.
It was obvious, a torubling topic, and I think you dealt with it well :D. This is probably the shortest review I'v ever written, BUT AT LEAST I DID REVIEW! (Unlike some little buggers...*stares in a paranoid fashion at no one in particular*).
But yeah, 'twas ace :D.
7/29/2007 c1 NesquikDudette
Ahh. It's sad. It's kind of nice, though, the way you wrote it. Barely any full sentences, but you got the point across terrifically. I really liked it without knowing why. This is definitely one of my favorites.
Ahh. It's sad. It's kind of nice, though, the way you wrote it. Barely any full sentences, but you got the point across terrifically. I really liked it without knowing why. This is definitely one of my favorites.
4/29/2007 c1
2Sarah D. F. Wall
Wow, very powerful. I think your reviewers said it all, but it is very intense and very...good. :] Good work with your imagery and words; you really got the mind frame with the words. Again, bravo.

Wow, very powerful. I think your reviewers said it all, but it is very intense and very...good. :] Good work with your imagery and words; you really got the mind frame with the words. Again, bravo.
12/25/2006 c1 Red Rose
Your description is so very lovely! So few words and so much told with them. good job!
Your description is so very lovely! So few words and so much told with them. good job!
10/29/2006 c1 randomperson
Immensely sad and affecting. You got so much description out of so few words. Wonderful.
Immensely sad and affecting. You got so much description out of so few words. Wonderful.
7/1/2005 c1
13Widom
*cries, hits random objects* God, I want to beat the hell out of his tormentor. But maybe that's just me.

*cries, hits random objects* God, I want to beat the hell out of his tormentor. But maybe that's just me.
6/7/2005 c1
26pneumothorax
'The room dimly lit with flickering candles, small torches of fading radiate light. ' makes me thinks of almost the victorians. Last sentance is a stunner.

'The room dimly lit with flickering candles, small torches of fading radiate light. ' makes me thinks of almost the victorians. Last sentance is a stunner.