for Stone10/11/2012 c1 
82Solemn Coyote
That's impressive. Short, but with a good punch. Nothing I can really find to critique here. It says everything it needs to, and not a word more.
82Solemn CoyoteThat's impressive. Short, but with a good punch. Nothing I can really find to critique here. It says everything it needs to, and not a word more.
5/15/2005 c1 4Eclipsia Soulbird
oh my gosh! this is short but so SO good! i love little stories like this almost more than anything; short and almost-poetic peices like this. you convey the character's view-point really well, yet keep it vague; which i like because it almost makes it personal; the audience wonders if this happened to the author... anyway, i'm rambling. really good work.
4Eclipsia Soulbirdoh my gosh! this is short but so SO good! i love little stories like this almost more than anything; short and almost-poetic peices like this. you convey the character's view-point really well, yet keep it vague; which i like because it almost makes it personal; the audience wonders if this happened to the author... anyway, i'm rambling. really good work.