2/26/2005 c1 Story-Teller's Aide
I can identify with all these poems! I like the style of this one :)
I can identify with all these poems! I like the style of this one :)
2/19/2005 c1 50anovelworld
wow, this perfectly fits a situation between me and a friend... we "loved" each other, but there were things keeping us apart.. until finally I couldn't take it and I spilled my heart completely to him in an email... well. Yeah. Now we aren't even talking so I should have just been quiet. Anyway, great poem.
wow, this perfectly fits a situation between me and a friend... we "loved" each other, but there were things keeping us apart.. until finally I couldn't take it and I spilled my heart completely to him in an email... well. Yeah. Now we aren't even talking so I should have just been quiet. Anyway, great poem.
2/11/2005 c1 292Fabian Cortez
A common theme in life is indeed the complexity of the unknown, and whether to tell or not for fear of rejection.
Well Done to portray it this way.
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
A common theme in life is indeed the complexity of the unknown, and whether to tell or not for fear of rejection.
Well Done to portray it this way.
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
2/8/2005 c1 41Jennifer Churchland
oh! so bittersweet...but very well done. i'm just like u. how many of us are there? poor people. anyways very sweet and good job. ~jenny~
oh! so bittersweet...but very well done. i'm just like u. how many of us are there? poor people. anyways very sweet and good job. ~jenny~
2/8/2005 c1 19Leader of the Mushroom Militia
Oh wow, *excactly*! Great poem =) Flows, rhymes plus gives a good message. Yuppers, keep it up!
Oh wow, *excactly*! Great poem =) Flows, rhymes plus gives a good message. Yuppers, keep it up!