for Silver Moons12/28/2008 c1 AngelicSerenity
Whoa!
Positively great! I love the whole 'viewpoint of a werwolf'! This kind of scene is one of my favorite, because it's a classic...yet, your idea is so 'out-there' and timeless. You are definetly one of my favorite fantasy authors.
Also, I must praise you on how descriptive this poem is. It's title is an eye-catcher- yet again, as well is the description. You have a thing for this, most definetly. Keep up the amazing writing!
-AngelicSerenity
Whoa!
Positively great! I love the whole 'viewpoint of a werwolf'! This kind of scene is one of my favorite, because it's a classic...yet, your idea is so 'out-there' and timeless. You are definetly one of my favorite fantasy authors.
Also, I must praise you on how descriptive this poem is. It's title is an eye-catcher- yet again, as well is the description. You have a thing for this, most definetly. Keep up the amazing writing!
-AngelicSerenity
11/20/2007 c1 
5Tigerwulf
Whoa... I think werewolves rule and this so badly captured it for me! Nice set up as well... Awesome! Best line? Hmm... probably the 'Becoming one with the wolf' bit. S'great!
'wulf
5TigerwulfWhoa... I think werewolves rule and this so badly captured it for me! Nice set up as well... Awesome! Best line? Hmm... probably the 'Becoming one with the wolf' bit. S'great!
'wulf
10/23/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
Deep poetry you got there. I like how you set it up. This is definitely a very good poem.
3Da Vinci at WorkDeep poetry you got there. I like how you set it up. This is definitely a very good poem.
10/2/2006 c1 8Kitsune gone insane
hey! nice poem!i am the author sean told ya about!my name is Courtney...lolanyway nice poem!
8Kitsune gone insanehey! nice poem!i am the author sean told ya about!my name is Courtney...lolanyway nice poem!
5/20/2006 c1 33LightfootLee
I love just about everything that has Werewolves in it, and this one didn't dissapoint. I especially liked the lines "howling in a langauage unknown to me" and "Shadows fleeing from my wretched shadow". Well done. This poems point of view might be able to help me with my new story. thanks for the inspiration pal.
33LightfootLeeI love just about everything that has Werewolves in it, and this one didn't dissapoint. I especially liked the lines "howling in a langauage unknown to me" and "Shadows fleeing from my wretched shadow". Well done. This poems point of view might be able to help me with my new story. thanks for the inspiration pal.
5/15/2005 c1 25Dameavar
This was really an amazing poem, because of the emotion and depth you put in to it. I really liked your word choice, and feeling, and I loved the way you started each little paragraph. The only thing that could have made this poem alot better, was that you should have extended the lines so it flowed a little better because even though it was outstanding it was a bit choppy. Good Poem. Keep Writing!P.S.- Ch. 5 of Red Eyes is up! R/R please.P.S.S.- Post the next chapter of Avalon Tre! I've been waiting to read it!
-Dameavar-
25DameavarThis was really an amazing poem, because of the emotion and depth you put in to it. I really liked your word choice, and feeling, and I loved the way you started each little paragraph. The only thing that could have made this poem alot better, was that you should have extended the lines so it flowed a little better because even though it was outstanding it was a bit choppy. Good Poem. Keep Writing!P.S.- Ch. 5 of Red Eyes is up! R/R please.P.S.S.- Post the next chapter of Avalon Tre! I've been waiting to read it!
-Dameavar-
2/12/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Great poem! I loved the last line..."Golden rays set me free" beautiful..I loved the structure of the poem as well, how each stanza started with one word then the sentence continued on the second line...it really made me feel like I now know what it feels like to become a werewolf...brilliant! :)
1o0oAnnieGreat poem! I loved the last line..."Golden rays set me free" beautiful..I loved the structure of the poem as well, how each stanza started with one word then the sentence continued on the second line...it really made me feel like I now know what it feels like to become a werewolf...brilliant! :)
2/8/2005 c1 11Bookworm12-8-90
eek! *runs and hides from scary inda and shivers under the covers. after a while, she lifts the corner of the sheets* is it safe to come out now?
11Bookworm12-8-90eek! *runs and hides from scary inda and shivers under the covers. after a while, she lifts the corner of the sheets* is it safe to come out now?
2/8/2005 c1 5Shadows Fury
Absolutely love werewolves...this was well written and I like the style. Good use of words. Keep up the great work. ^_^
5Shadows FuryAbsolutely love werewolves...this was well written and I like the style. Good use of words. Keep up the great work. ^_^
2/8/2005 c1 InSilverShadows
yay! Very nice, luff the descriptions. You write such awesome poetry, Inda! KEEP IT UP!
yay! Very nice, luff the descriptions. You write such awesome poetry, Inda! KEEP IT UP!