for Once upon a time5/26/2005 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
this is so deep, so dark, so passionately sad... I'm so glad i've never had to deal with something like this. I never do either.
88Icthoid Matro Coselosthis is so deep, so dark, so passionately sad... I'm so glad i've never had to deal with something like this. I never do either.
3/4/2005 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Once again, a beautiful poem. Amazing, I really have no words for something quite so real. I can really tell that this means something, and it shows in all you write. Well done!
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesOnce again, a beautiful poem. Amazing, I really have no words for something quite so real. I can really tell that this means something, and it shows in all you write. Well done!
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
2/21/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
Well expressed and nicely structured. Another very good work. My only suggestion here would be to go deeper and investigate different poetic devices like metaphors, allegory, imagery, etc. Very good work though.
219Matthew James CurrentWell expressed and nicely structured. Another very good work. My only suggestion here would be to go deeper and investigate different poetic devices like metaphors, allegory, imagery, etc. Very good work though.
2/21/2005 c1 81PetiteLumiere
Hey,I like this poem a lot. It totally relates to what Iw as going through a while back. Thanks for the review too!
Kati
81PetiteLumiereHey,I like this poem a lot. It totally relates to what Iw as going through a while back. Thanks for the review too!
Kati
2/21/2005 c1 23Whispered Secrets
I love the rhythm and the use of 'once upon a time', it really puts things in perspective. I can realate to this so well! Wonderful job!
23Whispered SecretsI love the rhythm and the use of 'once upon a time', it really puts things in perspective. I can realate to this so well! Wonderful job!
2/19/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
Wow I love this, I can totally relate to this; poems are such a good way to get feelings down, I have a few like this, may post them someday... thanks for sharing x Weasel Within x
Wow I love this, I can totally relate to this; poems are such a good way to get feelings down, I have a few like this, may post them someday... thanks for sharing x Weasel Within x
2/18/2005 c1 107Lover-of-Heartbreak
I loved the rhythm of this poem! It has really good flow. Deep meaning. Love it.
107Lover-of-HeartbreakI loved the rhythm of this poem! It has really good flow. Deep meaning. Love it.
2/18/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
wow. this is great, I liked it a lot. especially how you use the phrase Once Upon a Time. it makes it seem like you want to pretend that it's not real. lovely job! once again thanks so much for reveiwing me again! (*dances* oh yeah I'm supposed to be writing a review... that's what blink-182'll do to you... hehe). thanks again and lovely job!
~leila*
17incandescent.smileswow. this is great, I liked it a lot. especially how you use the phrase Once Upon a Time. it makes it seem like you want to pretend that it's not real. lovely job! once again thanks so much for reveiwing me again! (*dances* oh yeah I'm supposed to be writing a review... that's what blink-182'll do to you... hehe). thanks again and lovely job!
~leila*
2/13/2005 c1 6amygirlie
That was beautiful, and i'm sorry i hurt you. I know this is about me! Luv ya! luv, Amy
6amygirlieThat was beautiful, and i'm sorry i hurt you. I know this is about me! Luv ya! luv, Amy
2/11/2005 c1 37Fantwriter
Has a really nice meaning to it.
Only problem is the rhyming seemed incosistent, unless its me who doesn't get the pattern...xD it also made it sound a bit too choppy.
I'm sure you have the ability to make it cooler =)
37FantwriterHas a really nice meaning to it.
Only problem is the rhyming seemed incosistent, unless its me who doesn't get the pattern...xD it also made it sound a bit too choppy.
I'm sure you have the ability to make it cooler =)