
8/14/2005 c2 Amaya Windsong
haha yes! omg i love the misconception thing at the end of each other these...! this story is really funny, great job! i love the chapter titles and how you actually use at least most of it in the chapter. or, you do so far! |rikku|
haha yes! omg i love the misconception thing at the end of each other these...! this story is really funny, great job! i love the chapter titles and how you actually use at least most of it in the chapter. or, you do so far! |rikku|
8/14/2005 c1 Amaya Windsong
hahaha this is awesomely funny. so far, Dara is my favorite, he's a freakin' pimp! |rikku|
hahaha this is awesomely funny. so far, Dara is my favorite, he's a freakin' pimp! |rikku|
8/9/2005 c4
4Mage Dudette
YAY FOR THE PURPLENESS! wo! n fun chappie, but, yea, u knew that already, though i kno how long its taken for u to write it, its ok now! onto chapter 5! ^^

YAY FOR THE PURPLENESS! wo! n fun chappie, but, yea, u knew that already, though i kno how long its taken for u to write it, its ok now! onto chapter 5! ^^
8/8/2005 c4
3LadyBugLuck
YAY! I love it, don't think you rushed the end at all. Aw poor connor *hugs him* and hayden's such an ass...but hes a cute ass...lol, sgol hole ^^ See, you got it up ok, just took a while, lol. So glad you finally finished it! ttyl!

YAY! I love it, don't think you rushed the end at all. Aw poor connor *hugs him* and hayden's such an ass...but hes a cute ass...lol, sgol hole ^^ See, you got it up ok, just took a while, lol. So glad you finally finished it! ttyl!
8/7/2005 c4 Ether Boy
I still liked this Chapter regardless that stuff's being revealed. But still don't know too muc yet so still intrigued by them all. + i've got use to the layout know it's pretty good in all fairness.
I still liked this Chapter regardless that stuff's being revealed. But still don't know too muc yet so still intrigued by them all. + i've got use to the layout know it's pretty good in all fairness.
7/24/2005 c3
4Mage Dudette
heh. u kno? i actually forgot to review u wen i read this, i dno y... n then didnt review kinda deliberately... jst to annoy u =P yea, im evil like that. but, so r u for not updatin! U R TERRIBLE! u havnt updated for MONTHS! but, i kno u will b 2mz, thank gods... n i did think this was fun, wiv the child lock n everythin. cool! ^^ happy now ive reviewed? *pfft* to u! *sticks out tongue* ok, goin now...

heh. u kno? i actually forgot to review u wen i read this, i dno y... n then didnt review kinda deliberately... jst to annoy u =P yea, im evil like that. but, so r u for not updatin! U R TERRIBLE! u havnt updated for MONTHS! but, i kno u will b 2mz, thank gods... n i did think this was fun, wiv the child lock n everythin. cool! ^^ happy now ive reviewed? *pfft* to u! *sticks out tongue* ok, goin now...
7/15/2005 c3 Ether Boy
This story is awesome. i love how you don't know about the characters home dimensions it adds to the story. on the re-spacing i prefer the style of the first two chapters to be honest. but overall its an awesome story and i cant wait to read more of it.
This story is awesome. i love how you don't know about the characters home dimensions it adds to the story. on the re-spacing i prefer the style of the first two chapters to be honest. but overall its an awesome story and i cant wait to read more of it.
7/13/2005 c2 insipid happiness
I think Hayden is my favorite Character! *pokes him* hehe. He would be fun to annoy.
I think Hayden is my favorite Character! *pokes him* hehe. He would be fun to annoy.
7/13/2005 c1 insipid happiness
Haha. That was funny. I like Dara he's like my little brother only not as bad. o.O; I really liked it! *runs off to read the next chapter
*favs*
Haha. That was funny. I like Dara he's like my little brother only not as bad. o.O; I really liked it! *runs off to read the next chapter
*favs*
3/29/2005 c3
3LadyBugLuck
I know you hate this chapter, but I think you really did good, and i'm proud of you for finishing it...even if it took 9 months (O.o i still refuse to believe it was that long). I like it! Rai makes me giggle, and dara is adorable and hayden is such a...well...hes really snooty, lol. But he's adorable too. And yes, i'm rambling...so good job!

I know you hate this chapter, but I think you really did good, and i'm proud of you for finishing it...even if it took 9 months (O.o i still refuse to believe it was that long). I like it! Rai makes me giggle, and dara is adorable and hayden is such a...well...hes really snooty, lol. But he's adorable too. And yes, i'm rambling...so good job!
3/21/2005 c2
1Dark Wizardry
I love the humour! And Hayden is such a legend. It takes talent to make a self-absorbed bastard likeable. The shift in POV's really works, especially with Hayden's hidden feelings for Anora. It would be great if the chapter's were a little longer, with a little more prose between the dialogue. And the keep up the "misconceptions" at the end, they're hilarious.

I love the humour! And Hayden is such a legend. It takes talent to make a self-absorbed bastard likeable. The shift in POV's really works, especially with Hayden's hidden feelings for Anora. It would be great if the chapter's were a little longer, with a little more prose between the dialogue. And the keep up the "misconceptions" at the end, they're hilarious.
3/21/2005 c1 Dark Wizardry
Hahaha... I'm still laughing. Great dialogue, Anora's dry sense of humour really works. But I'm curious about this whole "dimension popping" thing. Next chapter...
Hahaha... I'm still laughing. Great dialogue, Anora's dry sense of humour really works. But I'm curious about this whole "dimension popping" thing. Next chapter...