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7/9/2005 c1 11Enigmatic Huntress
This has a level of sadness about it and is written in a unique way. It doems seem personal and that gives it power because it's clear you care about this poem and the emotions it carries bubbling underneath. Which is what makes the reader care too. The spag comment was clever. Luv Kaitx
6/17/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
hehehe. Love the whole spaghetti thing. Very original. Great job on this.
3/12/2005 c1 AutopsyBohmPix
Maybe some good marinara souce will help.I suggest Giant Brand.
2/19/2005 c1 44Glanners
this is good

i like how u describe wots goin on, wivout actually sayin wot is happening

it refelcts my childhood,

Glannerz/Sam
2/11/2005 c1 17CrimsonSoulTears
hypocritical for not rhyming? just wondering...

anyway, this is a great poem. The fact that theres personal stuff in here that I don't really get makes it really good. It has a detail and a personal-ness to it that's hard to achieve, but you have. It really helps convey the emotions within the piece.
2/10/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
nonrhyming is fine.. the spaghetti metaphor was unique and cool.. nicely done

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