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3/16/2005 c1 148Thyrt
yeah i feel like that sometimes..it sucks..but it'll be ok eventually..good job
2/26/2005 c1 33Pomaikai
Hey, I can see this set to music! This would make a great short song!
2/17/2005 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Thanks for reviewing my "Case against Christianity" essay. I know aobut the typo's. I'm just too damn lazy to re-upload the damn thing. Moving on to the review of this poen...

The most torturous game...I was expecting leather and whips, something kinky.I'm just kidding. I like it. It represents the whole dual nature of love very well. Good job.
2/17/2005 c1 4hvk
It's not that lame. It is inventive.

And a 'splut' is the sound a pie makes when it hits you.
2/12/2005 c1 Unsafety Pin
I really like this one! ^^ The last line is somehow awkward (I'm not exactly sure how, though). Good job :)
2/10/2005 c1 270dustytiger
i like this peice a lot, thank you for the review

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