for Two Perspectives the Same4/4/2017 c1 Poetry Lover
I think you did quite a nice job here. Maybe you could make more words rhyme however it's your choice.
I think you did quite a nice job here. Maybe you could make more words rhyme however it's your choice.
4/10/2005 c1 
70Aryanda
It wasn't that bad. Really, it wasn't. Please r&r more of my stories.::sniffle::i think everyones's ignoring me. :)
70AryandaIt wasn't that bad. Really, it wasn't. Please r&r more of my stories.::sniffle::i think everyones's ignoring me. :)
3/6/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
I disagree...I thought the poem was a really good narrative...keep on going!
I disagree...I thought the poem was a really good narrative...keep on going!
2/18/2005 c1 Jenni
This is my favorite :) *sigh* Ryan...yeah I'm a moron.
This is my favorite :) *sigh* Ryan...yeah I'm a moron.
2/18/2005 c1 16Noir Fleurir
I thought it was good (I've never really thought of using different points of view in poetry that's a cool idea-i only did it in books and I kind of got out of that habit.
16Noir FleurirI thought it was good (I've never really thought of using different points of view in poetry that's a cool idea-i only did it in books and I kind of got out of that habit.