for Magic Mirror9/23/2010 c1 anonymous
can i use this as a prompt for a fanfic?
can i use this as a prompt for a fanfic?
3/6/2007 c1 
174a silenced revolution
It seems like there's got to be a story behind this... Regardless, short, powerful, great!
174a silenced revolutionIt seems like there's got to be a story behind this... Regardless, short, powerful, great!
4/4/2005 c1 5Last
Very nice, it's like one of those things that someone could read 40 years form now and have a spark of inspiration for a whole book.
5LastVery nice, it's like one of those things that someone could read 40 years form now and have a spark of inspiration for a whole book.
3/18/2005 c1 298grip
I've read quite a few of your poems. They display short scenes or thoughts well. Ever thought about goin deeper into subjects or situations? You could make some 'deep' stuff. Keep on keeping on.
298gripI've read quite a few of your poems. They display short scenes or thoughts well. Ever thought about goin deeper into subjects or situations? You could make some 'deep' stuff. Keep on keeping on.
2/17/2005 c1 61the.pink.life
Nice nice nice. I really like this. What I want to know is where you got your inspiration. (Of course, yesterday I randomly wrote a poem about Humpty Dumpty, so who knows.)
61the.pink.lifeNice nice nice. I really like this. What I want to know is where you got your inspiration. (Of course, yesterday I randomly wrote a poem about Humpty Dumpty, so who knows.)
2/15/2005 c1 12Yuyuto
...I can't help to think about Fairy Tales when I read this. It's simple yet deep, nice work.
12Yuyuto...I can't help to think about Fairy Tales when I read this. It's simple yet deep, nice work.
2/12/2005 c1 99E.M. Laicrist
I like those first two lines the best, and the last two I find somehow amusing in a sardonic kind of way.
99E.M. LaicristI like those first two lines the best, and the last two I find somehow amusing in a sardonic kind of way.