for feather3/2/2005 c1 
2Charlotte Ao'Nei
i like it very much, as it makes me actually picture, a handsome young guy and watching him mystically.
2Charlotte Ao'Neii like it very much, as it makes me actually picture, a handsome young guy and watching him mystically.
2/26/2005 c1 a man
omg! this is so cute! Cute as in, lovely written and beautiful song material^^.. I love it, I love it I love it. You're so good with words.. =D=D=D this one's very.. delicate, kind of ethereal ish. Ok so I suck at reviews.. but I love it, and I think you're amazing. ahohoho~
omg! this is so cute! Cute as in, lovely written and beautiful song material^^.. I love it, I love it I love it. You're so good with words.. =D=D=D this one's very.. delicate, kind of ethereal ish. Ok so I suck at reviews.. but I love it, and I think you're amazing. ahohoho~
2/24/2005 c1 69PanDaemonAeon
Beautiful, the brackets actually make this piece what it is, I like that idea of really making "(softly)" the centerpiece of the poem. Needs some typos though.. you already know how much I luurve typos lol
69PanDaemonAeonBeautiful, the brackets actually make this piece what it is, I like that idea of really making "(softly)" the centerpiece of the poem. Needs some typos though.. you already know how much I luurve typos lol
2/12/2005 c1 gold against the soul
I like the tone of this poem. It's like your just hinting at everything, abstractly... you know? It's nice, and delicately written.
I like the tone of this poem. It's like your just hinting at everything, abstractly... you know? It's nice, and delicately written.
2/12/2005 c1 70elvenstorm
Brackets again! Love the whole atmosphere of this, its so soft and sensual you can just feel the emotions of the woman. Think there is a slight typo line 7. Anyway lovely feeling to the whole thing well done and keep writing.
70elvenstormBrackets again! Love the whole atmosphere of this, its so soft and sensual you can just feel the emotions of the woman. Think there is a slight typo line 7. Anyway lovely feeling to the whole thing well done and keep writing.
2/12/2005 c1 6Kiss-me-now9
Wow. I really liked it! I can just picture it in my mind, which to me is the sign of a good poem! Well done!
6Kiss-me-now9Wow. I really liked it! I can just picture it in my mind, which to me is the sign of a good poem! Well done!