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2/23/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Very interesting poem...the way you had almost every line be a noise really forced the reader to see AND hear the fight going on...the lines inbtwn the noises were powerful as well...about ignoring the pain and thinking about the ends justifying the means...the last line made me cringe CRUNCH...ow! keep writing!
2/14/2005 c1 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
Hmm. It was good . . . I din't really like it. But that doesn't make it bad. You've been on a roll, girl!
2/13/2005 c1 108Kirona of the skies
Wow. Interesting. Very. ^_^;

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