for These Things Take Time3/16/2007 c1 
31emptyword
Depressing, just the reaction you must've wanted. Really very good one here. That poem took me aback. I knew you were good at this craft, but I hadn't expected talent like that! :P I know I sound like a Pompous Ass, and probably I'm sorry for it. But this one-shot was just beautiful and unexpected enough to catch me off-guard.
"And we’d play records over and over: The Smiths made our misery poetic and taught us about the decadent anguish of love; Joy Division made sense out of our confusion and we heard how it felt before suicide; Lou Reed brought us our own culture from America, and Bowie did the same in our own country and Iggy Pop let us be angry with a destruction in our own minds."
I don't listen to much music, regretfully, but I could practically taste your words in that paragraph. So beautiful and succinct, capturing a great deal of feeling and creating a palpable mood.
I admit I'm curious about the title.
-P.A.
31emptywordDepressing, just the reaction you must've wanted. Really very good one here. That poem took me aback. I knew you were good at this craft, but I hadn't expected talent like that! :P I know I sound like a Pompous Ass, and probably I'm sorry for it. But this one-shot was just beautiful and unexpected enough to catch me off-guard.
"And we’d play records over and over: The Smiths made our misery poetic and taught us about the decadent anguish of love; Joy Division made sense out of our confusion and we heard how it felt before suicide; Lou Reed brought us our own culture from America, and Bowie did the same in our own country and Iggy Pop let us be angry with a destruction in our own minds."
I don't listen to much music, regretfully, but I could practically taste your words in that paragraph. So beautiful and succinct, capturing a great deal of feeling and creating a palpable mood.
I admit I'm curious about the title.
-P.A.
2/17/2005 c1 26Aloh Dark
Oh wow, so beautiful. So very beautiful. I love this. It's just... Amazing. Simply amazing.
26Aloh DarkOh wow, so beautiful. So very beautiful. I love this. It's just... Amazing. Simply amazing.
2/13/2005 c1 rachel
*tears*, that was beautiful.
*tears*, that was beautiful.