4/30/2007 c1 2KiraChan20
DId u give up? I really, REALLY like it. SO please, I kno it's been awhile, but I LOVe it!
Now I'm going to go cry in corner.
=^,~^=
~Kira-chan~
DId u give up? I really, REALLY like it. SO please, I kno it's been awhile, but I LOVe it!
Now I'm going to go cry in corner.
=^,~^=
~Kira-chan~
10/27/2005 c15 PadmaeGirl
I really liked your story. The occasional swear words bug me, but maybe I'm just weird. Do you really need them?
I really liked your story. The occasional swear words bug me, but maybe I'm just weird. Do you really need them?
5/22/2005 c1 49Neaera
yes! the last book... that's kinda sad... i kinda hate finishing things... it's like...dead... but i still have to read it so it's not 'dead' yet.. lol... yeah i'm weird... awesomely wicked, keep it up!
yes! the last book... that's kinda sad... i kinda hate finishing things... it's like...dead... but i still have to read it so it's not 'dead' yet.. lol... yeah i'm weird... awesomely wicked, keep it up!
5/20/2005 c15 Jess
I NEED an update...i just read all the stories, i need to kno what happens, I hope sara really didnt die, i really hope he finds her!UPDATE plz...!
I NEED an update...i just read all the stories, i need to kno what happens, I hope sara really didnt die, i really hope he finds her!UPDATE plz...!
5/1/2005 c15 Dement Ecureuil
Didn't want to log in...
Are you finished with your play? Update soon!
Didn't want to log in...
Are you finished with your play? Update soon!
3/19/2005 c15 5Rhiannon Aurorafai
Hey~Oh, poor Ryan! Thanks for updating! Is Sara gone for good or is she still alive cause thats been bothering me for ages!Rhia!
Hey~Oh, poor Ryan! Thanks for updating! Is Sara gone for good or is she still alive cause thats been bothering me for ages!Rhia!
3/19/2005 c15 Battle of Words
Man... I almost thought you died or something! Lol. Great to see that you are alive, and have updated. Keep up the great work! I have to say that I realy hate that Mallorie. I hope he TAKES HER DOWN! lol... ~The Earth Mystic
Man... I almost thought you died or something! Lol. Great to see that you are alive, and have updated. Keep up the great work! I have to say that I realy hate that Mallorie. I hope he TAKES HER DOWN! lol... ~The Earth Mystic
3/3/2005 c13 PadmaeGirl
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD! I LOVE HEARING ABOUT DAVID! Great job, try adding some commas!
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD! I LOVE HEARING ABOUT DAVID! Great job, try adding some commas!
2/27/2005 c13 Rhiannon Aurorafai
Hey~Great chapter! Can't say much now cause I gotta do homework! Update soon!Rhia~
Hey~Great chapter! Can't say much now cause I gotta do homework! Update soon!Rhia~
2/27/2005 c13 Battle of Words
It is ok that this was a short chapter. You have been doing a great job, and you are due a short chapter by now! Lol... Keep up your super story writeing! ~The Earth Mystic
It is ok that this was a short chapter. You have been doing a great job, and you are due a short chapter by now! Lol... Keep up your super story writeing! ~The Earth Mystic
2/25/2005 c12 6Pigment of Your Imagination
hehe. it was so dramatic that i was smiling and giggling the whole way through. haha
chiri
hehe. it was so dramatic that i was smiling and giggling the whole way through. haha
chiri
2/24/2005 c12 5Rhiannon Aurorafai
Hey~YAY! AN ARMY! Is sara still alive? if so, is she ever coming back? i miss sara! update soon!Rhia~
Hey~YAY! AN ARMY! Is sara still alive? if so, is she ever coming back? i miss sara! update soon!Rhia~
2/24/2005 c10 PadmaeGirl
HOW COULD YOU? Sara's the good person, the hero of the story! You can't just kill her halfway! Please tell me you're just joking!
HOW COULD YOU? Sara's the good person, the hero of the story! You can't just kill her halfway! Please tell me you're just joking!
2/23/2005 c10 11Eldee
It is really good so far, but I am here to review and with my unaturally short attention span I will... what am I doing, oh yeah!
Try to go into your characters a little more. I still am not totally sure of Ryan's personality, even though I read the other stories.
Description is good, I like description.
Other than that...(short attention span takes over and she bounds off to go get some cookiedough)
*Mati*
It is really good so far, but I am here to review and with my unaturally short attention span I will... what am I doing, oh yeah!
Try to go into your characters a little more. I still am not totally sure of Ryan's personality, even though I read the other stories.
Description is good, I like description.
Other than that...(short attention span takes over and she bounds off to go get some cookiedough)
*Mati*
2/23/2005 c10 6Pigment of Your Imagination
heh, when i thought of the guy talking to Ryan in the cave, i imagined an ugly, old sort of hippie guy, but when i found out it was Sara's brother, haha, it changed from ugly hippy to some brown haired surfer guy. haha. ^^
chiri
heh, when i thought of the guy talking to Ryan in the cave, i imagined an ugly, old sort of hippie guy, but when i found out it was Sara's brother, haha, it changed from ugly hippy to some brown haired surfer guy. haha. ^^
chiri