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2/16/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Very cool poem! I love how you mixed longer lines with shorter lines...I especially loved the line "have been gasped from metal maws" awesome word choices and phrases! keep writing! :)
2/16/2005 c1 7The System Mother
Hello! This is a good one. I like it a lot ^_^ Yay! Yay!

Thanks for the review.
2/14/2005 c1 8Rendered-Helpless
I like this poem. It's truthful.

It also quite clearly makes it's point.

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