for Revolution9/4/2005 c1 Allis Dalline
Hey, do you remember me? It has been a while, yes? Forgive me for disappearing for a long, long time...
There is something very interesting about this piece. I do not know how to describe it, but I do know that I like your style. The poem has an uneven yet lyrical quality, and is subtle yet expressive. Good work.
Hey, do you remember me? It has been a while, yes? Forgive me for disappearing for a long, long time...
There is something very interesting about this piece. I do not know how to describe it, but I do know that I like your style. The poem has an uneven yet lyrical quality, and is subtle yet expressive. Good work.
7/13/2005 c1 celestral
I really don't like this... But then there are bits I do like... Now what? I guess the idea is the most interesting and the word play is good. So me not liking it is my fault.
I really don't like this... But then there are bits I do like... Now what? I guess the idea is the most interesting and the word play is good. So me not liking it is my fault.
2/15/2005 c1 
121AmethystPisces
Excellently written and encouraging until the last line. But I love it anyway.
121AmethystPiscesExcellently written and encouraging until the last line. But I love it anyway.