for Choose Your Story10/31/2010 c2 
1zeela50
I think I'm going to have to go for 2. It's a genre I'm interested in and the story seems good so far. And the note...
1zeela50I think I'm going to have to go for 2. It's a genre I'm interested in and the story seems good so far. And the note...
4/6/2009 c2 9Furfaidz
it seems this story has been neglected for nearly 4 years so i feel like some kind of party crasherbut anyway, I like story started #2. it seems that from the reviews, 4 is doing great, 2 is second best, 3 is third and 1 is third.
personally, i like 2 and 4 but i like 2 more because of the character relatence. that, and so many things can happen (and i also want to know 'what the heck happened with that desk!') saying that, 4 isn't so bad either. sounds alchemy or pagan/wiccanee too... i want to know what happened at his brother's death but oh, i feel like i know what'll happen with that story so i don't give it much of a thought.
story number 3 predictable but it is one i might write but not post on fictionpress. story # 1 was interesting too, and funny. i feel like # 1's next chap with fast forward to the present and that she helps him hide his wolf self. it's kind of predictable to me too. the teacher is scary though, i mean, who chases naked little boys in the forest? awkward! but that's why i found it so funny lol
anyway, i'm being too garulous.
so to be blunt, i like #4. I don't know if you'll write on that, or any onf the other stories but this is just to get it off my chest. :D thanksfor posting a story like this! i'm currently writing one kind of like it called your story: 7 minutes in heaven! :P
9Furfaidzit seems this story has been neglected for nearly 4 years so i feel like some kind of party crasherbut anyway, I like story started #2. it seems that from the reviews, 4 is doing great, 2 is second best, 3 is third and 1 is third.
personally, i like 2 and 4 but i like 2 more because of the character relatence. that, and so many things can happen (and i also want to know 'what the heck happened with that desk!') saying that, 4 isn't so bad either. sounds alchemy or pagan/wiccanee too... i want to know what happened at his brother's death but oh, i feel like i know what'll happen with that story so i don't give it much of a thought.
story number 3 predictable but it is one i might write but not post on fictionpress. story # 1 was interesting too, and funny. i feel like # 1's next chap with fast forward to the present and that she helps him hide his wolf self. it's kind of predictable to me too. the teacher is scary though, i mean, who chases naked little boys in the forest? awkward! but that's why i found it so funny lol
anyway, i'm being too garulous.
so to be blunt, i like #4. I don't know if you'll write on that, or any onf the other stories but this is just to get it off my chest. :D thanksfor posting a story like this! i'm currently writing one kind of like it called your story: 7 minutes in heaven! :P
12/14/2005 c6 Hail the Warrior
Amusing stuff. This is going to be fun. I chose Choice 3...obviously. I
Amusing stuff. This is going to be fun. I chose Choice 3...obviously. I
10/28/2005 c1 23Damien Vlashtov
Cheers! An excellent idea, I think it would be interesting both to read, and to write. I think doing some type of romance might be interesting, one path could lead to a violet murder, the other to true love? Sounds cliche, but i think it could be very original depending on how the characters are developed. Do indeed write it!
23Damien VlashtovCheers! An excellent idea, I think it would be interesting both to read, and to write. I think doing some type of romance might be interesting, one path could lead to a violet murder, the other to true love? Sounds cliche, but i think it could be very original depending on how the characters are developed. Do indeed write it!
8/23/2005 c2 Sally-andersonn
Hi! Tghe idea is very cool.
Starter number 4 - not sure about who the story will be centred on. freedom of choice.number 3- fantasy isn't my thing so i won't commentnumber 2- very cute and spooky. Good character developement. The people seem real.number 1- I foudn it light hearted and funny.
I do hope you choose number 2. It has the whole' I am an average teenager ' thing going on.
Hi! Tghe idea is very cool.
Starter number 4 - not sure about who the story will be centred on. freedom of choice.number 3- fantasy isn't my thing so i won't commentnumber 2- very cute and spooky. Good character developement. The people seem real.number 1- I foudn it light hearted and funny.
I do hope you choose number 2. It has the whole' I am an average teenager ' thing going on.
8/11/2005 c2 mwegan
Hi! It's been awhile! I thought I would check back and see if you had anything new posted, since I hadn't gotten an alert from you in while. I was reading the other views and realized that I hadn't voted. I thought I had a while back. I must have forgot, or something. Anyway, my vote is for #4, but it wasn't an easy choice - I pretty much enjoy whatever you write.
Hi! It's been awhile! I thought I would check back and see if you had anything new posted, since I hadn't gotten an alert from you in while. I was reading the other views and realized that I hadn't voted. I thought I had a while back. I must have forgot, or something. Anyway, my vote is for #4, but it wasn't an easy choice - I pretty much enjoy whatever you write.
8/9/2005 c2 eternalversifier
Oh, definately the last one! #4 all the way! It had a more chill to it than the others and I just like that sort of story better than other types mostly. Please do #4!
~Starr~
P.s. Check out one of my stories it ya get bored one day...but don't feel like you have to! ^_^
Oh, definately the last one! #4 all the way! It had a more chill to it than the others and I just like that sort of story better than other types mostly. Please do #4!
~Starr~
P.s. Check out one of my stories it ya get bored one day...but don't feel like you have to! ^_^
8/8/2005 c2 2temblance
I think I like number four best. I'm looking forward to reading it, if you decide to start!
2temblanceI think I like number four best. I'm looking forward to reading it, if you decide to start!
8/8/2005 c1 temblance
Haha, I remember doing those stories where you chose what you wanted. I even tried to write one myself, but it got too hard with all the different plots. Your idea is creative. Please consider doing this!
Haha, I remember doing those stories where you chose what you wanted. I even tried to write one myself, but it got too hard with all the different plots. Your idea is creative. Please consider doing this!
7/18/2005 c2 81daphnegray78
I'm voting that, first of all, we just vote on the story starters. It just seems simpler that way.
Then I'm voting for story start #2, Untitled. That just seems like a really interesting story starter. There are all sorts of things you could do with that story.
Good luck with this! I'll keep an eye on this. ;)
~Daphne~
P.S. Now, I know it's been awhile since I've dropped by your corner of FP... but why did you do this to me? Where did all of your beautiful stories go? (cries) Why did you take them down?
81daphnegray78I'm voting that, first of all, we just vote on the story starters. It just seems simpler that way.
Then I'm voting for story start #2, Untitled. That just seems like a really interesting story starter. There are all sorts of things you could do with that story.
Good luck with this! I'll keep an eye on this. ;)
~Daphne~
P.S. Now, I know it's been awhile since I've dropped by your corner of FP... but why did you do this to me? Where did all of your beautiful stories go? (cries) Why did you take them down?
7/17/2005 c2 6RoseMcCann
Hello, hello! I must say, it's taken me long enough to get over here.
I vote for either number two or number three. It's really a toss-up. Both of them sound like they could be extremely interesting.
I love your writing style, by the way. It's very easy to read, and retains my interest, which is sometimes tricky to do when I'm reading something off of a computer screen.
6RoseMcCannHello, hello! I must say, it's taken me long enough to get over here.
I vote for either number two or number three. It's really a toss-up. Both of them sound like they could be extremely interesting.
I love your writing style, by the way. It's very easy to read, and retains my interest, which is sometimes tricky to do when I'm reading something off of a computer screen.
6/29/2005 c2 1Clodhopper
im into fantasy and supernat too. do the last one do the last one! it gave me goosebumps. i like it the best. interesting idea, i'll be curious to see where you go with this whole thing. seriously, though, the last one kept my interest the best.
~Mack
Ps, if you're ever bored i would be honored if you'd be willing to read one of my stories - if not i totally understand. thank you!
1Clodhopperim into fantasy and supernat too. do the last one do the last one! it gave me goosebumps. i like it the best. interesting idea, i'll be curious to see where you go with this whole thing. seriously, though, the last one kept my interest the best.
~Mack
Ps, if you're ever bored i would be honored if you'd be willing to read one of my stories - if not i totally understand. thank you!
6/19/2005 c2 11arachibutyrophobia
I choose story number for! lol. i wonder how you already knew that...so yeah. i guess it could branch out to if she runs out the room screaming (like i would) maybe crash into some new character *shrugs* or try another spell to find Derrick.
good luck!
11arachibutyrophobiaI choose story number for! lol. i wonder how you already knew that...so yeah. i guess it could branch out to if she runs out the room screaming (like i would) maybe crash into some new character *shrugs* or try another spell to find Derrick.
good luck!
6/13/2005 c2 4Alexz Lynn
I got an author alert about this earlier back, but never took a look at it. Now I'm glad I did because I think this is a wonderful idea! Of the choices I like Story Starter #2 best. However, I like all of your writing, so any will probably be fine. :) Hope to see more soon! ~ Alexz Lynn
4Alexz LynnI got an author alert about this earlier back, but never took a look at it. Now I'm glad I did because I think this is a wonderful idea! Of the choices I like Story Starter #2 best. However, I like all of your writing, so any will probably be fine. :) Hope to see more soon! ~ Alexz Lynn