for Let go5/26/2005 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
this is so friggi'n... freaky! I can relate too much! ahh! so sad... you're like the best writer i've ever read from!
88Icthoid Matro Coselosthis is so friggi'n... freaky! I can relate too much! ahh! so sad... you're like the best writer i've ever read from!
4/13/2005 c1 7gingerbeer
This is very saddening, because a dear friend of mine recently died after getting hooked up to a machine, then disconnected from it. He lived a good life, and thank you for writing such a beautifully rhymed poem.
7gingerbeerThis is very saddening, because a dear friend of mine recently died after getting hooked up to a machine, then disconnected from it. He lived a good life, and thank you for writing such a beautifully rhymed poem.
2/21/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
A sweet and heartfelt piece. My only suggestion is that I get the feeling that you could make this piece flow more effectively if you didn't rhyme it. Sometimes it just works out like that, so don't be discouraged and just look at it as an opportunity to become a better poet. Overal this is a very touching piece and a good poem.
219Matthew James CurrentA sweet and heartfelt piece. My only suggestion is that I get the feeling that you could make this piece flow more effectively if you didn't rhyme it. Sometimes it just works out like that, so don't be discouraged and just look at it as an opportunity to become a better poet. Overal this is a very touching piece and a good poem.
2/21/2005 c1 120tabiboi
Yikes- lots of emotion in here, a lot of hurting. Very sad to the reader- but really, a great job of expressing yourself. Keep up the good work!
120tabiboiYikes- lots of emotion in here, a lot of hurting. Very sad to the reader- but really, a great job of expressing yourself. Keep up the good work!
2/20/2005 c1 85TheLastKiss
That was really beautiful. It is crazy how we always have so much trouble forgetting those who have hurt us. The memories still remain to haunt you forever.
Thanks for your many uplifting reviews!
Best Wishes,Brittney
85TheLastKissThat was really beautiful. It is crazy how we always have so much trouble forgetting those who have hurt us. The memories still remain to haunt you forever.
Thanks for your many uplifting reviews!
Best Wishes,Brittney
2/19/2005 c1 8Room Without A Door
Wow. Very well done. I especially like the last 4 lines. It brings the poem to a nice closure. Hope you write more soon!
8Room Without A DoorWow. Very well done. I especially like the last 4 lines. It brings the poem to a nice closure. Hope you write more soon!
2/17/2005 c1 1freaky-creature
This is really nice. I find your writing skills to be very well. Kepp up the superior work.
1freaky-creatureThis is really nice. I find your writing skills to be very well. Kepp up the superior work.