for silent night starless fate3/7/2005 c1 
8Star-strung-prophet
Thanks for the review. I liked this one especially, the imagery and last line have a chilling effect. It seems almost lyrical. While a few lines might be cleaned up for better clarity, it is overall a well written and expessive piece.
8Star-strung-prophetThanks for the review. I liked this one especially, the imagery and last line have a chilling effect. It seems almost lyrical. While a few lines might be cleaned up for better clarity, it is overall a well written and expessive piece.
3/6/2005 c1 65AmaranthineMisery
lovely poem... i can relate it to so many things... thanx for the reviews and srry mine is so short (i dont review very well..lol)
65AmaranthineMiserylovely poem... i can relate it to so many things... thanx for the reviews and srry mine is so short (i dont review very well..lol)
2/20/2005 c1 29under estimated artistsoul
This is extremetly deep and it puts a worry inside me, but. I liked this though, your phrase "No tiny bit is left of hope leavin me to cope with all the pain inside." That sentence could be compared to a spider hanging from one thread, and then that thread was cut and the spider fell so far down. Ok I'm done blabbing to much. This is defintely more deeper than your last few.
29under estimated artistsoulThis is extremetly deep and it puts a worry inside me, but. I liked this though, your phrase "No tiny bit is left of hope leavin me to cope with all the pain inside." That sentence could be compared to a spider hanging from one thread, and then that thread was cut and the spider fell so far down. Ok I'm done blabbing to much. This is defintely more deeper than your last few.
2/18/2005 c1 113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS
wow Obi! That's awesome! I really really love this poem and totally understand what you mean! i like the beginning'in my symphony of screams, I find peace in what seems turned all black and bare'its awesome! keep up the great work kid!dearlyFTT
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArSwow Obi! That's awesome! I really really love this poem and totally understand what you mean! i like the beginning'in my symphony of screams, I find peace in what seems turned all black and bare'its awesome! keep up the great work kid!dearlyFTT