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3/4/2005 c1 19ColdFrost
This is very, very good. FP won't let me do stanzas either - most annoying! I love the lines: "You’ve given up on me

I’ve given up on myself"Another great poem.

~ColdFrost
2/20/2005 c1 Guest
This is very well written. I think that a lot of people feel like this. You have portrayed the feeling of the poem really well. Just one thing - in the summary you've spelt particularly as praticularly. This is an amzing poem.
2/19/2005 c1 41Stefen
Um... wow. Strong words. Very powerful. Well, it made *me* feel sick. :) heh... If this is non-fictional, please don't feel this way. Noone expects you to be perfect. Don't be so hard on yourself. Yeah... Nice writing. :-)

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