for Timeless Rain5/26/2005 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
wow... seriously.. this is beautifull... just wow... my heart is beating faster right now... just wow.
88Icthoid Matro Coseloswow... seriously.. this is beautifull... just wow... my heart is beating faster right now... just wow.
3/28/2005 c1 7gingerbeer
"Whispering to me | with an eerie sigh" is one of the best lines ever! Now I know what to say when people ask me why I like rain. Seriously though, very beautiful... "stormy haze," what a beautiful image!
7gingerbeer"Whispering to me | with an eerie sigh" is one of the best lines ever! Now I know what to say when people ask me why I like rain. Seriously though, very beautiful... "stormy haze," what a beautiful image!
3/8/2005 c1 8songofthesiren
much wisdom will come to those who will stop and take the time to listen to the rain ~love is all you need~
8songofthesirenmuch wisdom will come to those who will stop and take the time to listen to the rain ~love is all you need~
3/7/2005 c1 16Greenwitch
wow, this is pretty! i especially like the line "Speaking to anyone who will listen to their words." good job! and thanks for reviewing my poem. ^_^~greenwitch
16Greenwitchwow, this is pretty! i especially like the line "Speaking to anyone who will listen to their words." good job! and thanks for reviewing my poem. ^_^~greenwitch
3/2/2005 c1 27GravitationDreams
Very nice poem. ^_^ I personally love the rain, and you captured the essence of a dark, stormy day quite well. I like the last stanza the best; it has very nice wording. Great job!
27GravitationDreamsVery nice poem. ^_^ I personally love the rain, and you captured the essence of a dark, stormy day quite well. I like the last stanza the best; it has very nice wording. Great job!
3/2/2005 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Hi again, I often leave multiple reviews!
I liked this poem a lot, I've always loved rain. The emotions you bring up (at least in me) in this poem are very deep and moving, and the descripition is flawless! Well done and keep writing!
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesHi again, I often leave multiple reviews!
I liked this poem a lot, I've always loved rain. The emotions you bring up (at least in me) in this poem are very deep and moving, and the descripition is flawless! Well done and keep writing!
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
2/25/2005 c1 8silversilence16
Hey, I thought your poem was really pretty. It was very meaningful. I love poetry that makes you think. It kinda asks you to put yourself into it and imagine everything. Plus I love a nice rainy day, lol. Nice job and thanx much for your review! ^_^
8silversilence16Hey, I thought your poem was really pretty. It was very meaningful. I love poetry that makes you think. It kinda asks you to put yourself into it and imagine everything. Plus I love a nice rainy day, lol. Nice job and thanx much for your review! ^_^
2/24/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
i really liek it.. the repition is nice and its very true.. great job,.. tahnks for your review :)
612simpleplan13i really liek it.. the repition is nice and its very true.. great job,.. tahnks for your review :)
2/24/2005 c1 14Surreptitiously Scarlet
that's really good! It just sort of gives you like this picture in your mind and i can't even explain it. i really liked it.
14Surreptitiously Scarletthat's really good! It just sort of gives you like this picture in your mind and i can't even explain it. i really liked it.
2/23/2005 c1 87Obsidian Eyes
Beautiful! You think my poems are good? Take a look at your own! Each line in this was perfect. Wow. If you have the time, read my newest poem. Coincidently it includes rain =) Ill review more of your work soon!
87Obsidian EyesBeautiful! You think my poems are good? Take a look at your own! Each line in this was perfect. Wow. If you have the time, read my newest poem. Coincidently it includes rain =) Ill review more of your work soon!
2/22/2005 c1 6The Empress of the Orient
hey i first learned this along time ago that u get a lot more reviews if u except anonymus reviews just a pointer.
nice poem and at first it ryhmed and then it didn't srry for the spelling. . .i like yur free verse it was realli good! keep writing! ^_^!
oh and thanks for the review!
6The Empress of the Orienthey i first learned this along time ago that u get a lot more reviews if u except anonymus reviews just a pointer.
nice poem and at first it ryhmed and then it didn't srry for the spelling. . .i like yur free verse it was realli good! keep writing! ^_^!
oh and thanks for the review!
2/22/2005 c1 Renada
I'm reviewing at your request, though, I would have anyways. I always return the favor. ~_^ Anyways, I loved this piece! It flowed beautifully and the imagery and other personifications were wonderful! I'm going to have to check out some of your other works. ^_^Ren
I'm reviewing at your request, though, I would have anyways. I always return the favor. ~_^ Anyways, I loved this piece! It flowed beautifully and the imagery and other personifications were wonderful! I'm going to have to check out some of your other works. ^_^Ren
2/21/2005 c1 12Elizabeth Warner
0_0 purty... I like the ending! ^^ u write good poems! Ohh.. and thankie for the review on mine, but ANWAYS, your is very prettyness. It ryhmes at some parts. My friend would like it. XD He didn't like mine because it didn't rhyme anywhere. lol. I like the line: "Leaving me in a graceless daze" the best. Ok, I'm done rambling on. wonderful poem!
12Elizabeth Warner0_0 purty... I like the ending! ^^ u write good poems! Ohh.. and thankie for the review on mine, but ANWAYS, your is very prettyness. It ryhmes at some parts. My friend would like it. XD He didn't like mine because it didn't rhyme anywhere. lol. I like the line: "Leaving me in a graceless daze" the best. Ok, I'm done rambling on. wonderful poem!