
6/6/2005 c1
2QuiEtXpeRfeCti0n
I love it. It's absolutely amazing. The two lines "love filled sin / brings heaven to us" are the ones that really hit me. Again, I don't know why.. they just did..

I love it. It's absolutely amazing. The two lines "love filled sin / brings heaven to us" are the ones that really hit me. Again, I don't know why.. they just did..
2/20/2005 c1
13aquamoon222
It's sad but true. I think that there can only be one totally true church. This is very powerful, and I totally agree! Nicely done.
If it's no trouble, I was hoping you'd R&R my new poem Timeless Rain. Thanks!

It's sad but true. I think that there can only be one totally true church. This is very powerful, and I totally agree! Nicely done.
If it's no trouble, I was hoping you'd R&R my new poem Timeless Rain. Thanks!
2/19/2005 c1
102firemounrain
In the last line, "religions" should be "religion's." Being preached at is disgusting, I agree. Actually, I'm agnostic but when I visit my friend's church I sometimes get all teary. They have this really well-spoken priest...

In the last line, "religions" should be "religion's." Being preached at is disgusting, I agree. Actually, I'm agnostic but when I visit my friend's church I sometimes get all teary. They have this really well-spoken priest...