for The Broken Road3/8/2010 c17 
2bubublacz
Well, that was fast. I thought that things would start to get irritating... But... She might have something up her sleeve. I'm just waiting...
2bubublaczWell, that was fast. I thought that things would start to get irritating... But... She might have something up her sleeve. I'm just waiting...
3/8/2010 c15 bubublacz
I was thinking that this was 'bout to happen some time. I wasn't prepared actually.
I was thinking that this was 'bout to happen some time. I wasn't prepared actually.
3/7/2010 c9 bubublacz
Oh yeah... I forgot to ask. Since the Earl lived in that area, why is it that he just found her now 5 years later. I mean unless he didn't frequent the town, or she didn't...
Oh yeah... I forgot to ask. Since the Earl lived in that area, why is it that he just found her now 5 years later. I mean unless he didn't frequent the town, or she didn't...
3/7/2010 c8 bubublacz
I really like the flow of the story. It's neither too fast or too slow. And it's so good that I'm not bored but anticipating the next moves of your story!
I really like the flow of the story. It's neither too fast or too slow. And it's so good that I'm not bored but anticipating the next moves of your story!
3/7/2010 c2 bubublacz
I wasn't sure 'bout the character at first, since it seems that she's the same beautiful girl but I have to tell you that I read this because of her disability.
I wasn't sure 'bout the character at first, since it seems that she's the same beautiful girl but I have to tell you that I read this because of her disability.
1/24/2010 c23 HeARmeRaWR
Alright, let me start off by saying that I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing, although it did frustrate me a bit at times.
Like when Logan said all those mean things to her AND when he accused her of setting him up and betraying him and all that business.
Yeah, well like I said the story was great and your writing is phenomenal!
Oh, and sorry for not reviewing the other chapters but, I really wanted to finish reading this and I was flying through the chapters XD
I just really wanted to finish and see what became of Logan and Lillian. The ending was cute. I;m a sucker for happy endings ^_^
Anyways, it was a pleasure reading this and I will like to read Prada & Prejudice as well. It sounds very interesting =D
Alright, let me start off by saying that I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing, although it did frustrate me a bit at times.
Like when Logan said all those mean things to her AND when he accused her of setting him up and betraying him and all that business.
Yeah, well like I said the story was great and your writing is phenomenal!
Oh, and sorry for not reviewing the other chapters but, I really wanted to finish reading this and I was flying through the chapters XD
I just really wanted to finish and see what became of Logan and Lillian. The ending was cute. I;m a sucker for happy endings ^_^
Anyways, it was a pleasure reading this and I will like to read Prada & Prejudice as well. It sounds very interesting =D
1/21/2010 c8 3Chocolate is Yummy
Great chapter. luved this line "He almost considered losing on purpose, just to find out.
Almost."
adding the extra almost was genius. ^.^
3Chocolate is YummyGreat chapter. luved this line "He almost considered losing on purpose, just to find out.
Almost."
adding the extra almost was genius. ^.^
12/31/2009 c15 QuantumGlow
I wasn't going to review at the end of the story, but the little note about your screen name is too funny.
You have a very nice writing style, I was not expecting that plot twist.
I wasn't going to review at the end of the story, but the little note about your screen name is too funny.
You have a very nice writing style, I was not expecting that plot twist.
12/28/2009 c2 4Rosula
I'm glad he saved her. Clarkson was a tyrant! I've found it's hard to believe some are blind, too. It's interesting, though.
Good chapter. It's fun trying to tie the prologue with what I've learnt from this chapter. Trying to figure everything out. I've got a few ideas, but I think I'll just wait and see. :)
4RosulaI'm glad he saved her. Clarkson was a tyrant! I've found it's hard to believe some are blind, too. It's interesting, though.
Good chapter. It's fun trying to tie the prologue with what I've learnt from this chapter. Trying to figure everything out. I've got a few ideas, but I think I'll just wait and see. :)
12/28/2009 c1 Rosula
Nice job. I can simply see why you're published from this prologue. Your writing's great!
The prologue is begging me to read more and I'm afraid I must comply! :)
Nice job. I can simply see why you're published from this prologue. Your writing's great!
The prologue is begging me to read more and I'm afraid I must comply! :)
12/3/2009 c25 7Silencia
... Wow... this story was so intense... so awesome... so dramatic... ITS A MASTERPIECE! I cannot even try to find words to describe how great this story is... Keep on writing girl, you're awesome XD
Grtz Silencia
ps: would you please check out my stories? I would be honoured if you did...
7Silencia... Wow... this story was so intense... so awesome... so dramatic... ITS A MASTERPIECE! I cannot even try to find words to describe how great this story is... Keep on writing girl, you're awesome XD
Grtz Silencia
ps: would you please check out my stories? I would be honoured if you did...