for Music alters attitudes3/11/2005 c1 
84Escapist
Hm. I liked the general idea of this, but even though your poem is in poem form, it doesn't read like poetry. I think if you tweaked the structure and played around with word usage and adjectives, it could be better.
84EscapistHm. I liked the general idea of this, but even though your poem is in poem form, it doesn't read like poetry. I think if you tweaked the structure and played around with word usage and adjectives, it could be better.
2/25/2005 c1 18twistedtruths
I really liked this poem. It's just the way that I feel about music. Great job on it
18twistedtruthsI really liked this poem. It's just the way that I feel about music. Great job on it
2/20/2005 c1 Ethereal October
This was almost more of an essay than a poem, presenting some facts and what not. I would change the format if I were you.
This was almost more of an essay than a poem, presenting some facts and what not. I would change the format if I were you.
2/20/2005 c1 102firemounrain
I agree with the music helping people to cope thing. It's really true- when there's a song with a memory attached, or something that makes you feel less (or more) like screaming...
102firemounrainI agree with the music helping people to cope thing. It's really true- when there's a song with a memory attached, or something that makes you feel less (or more) like screaming...