for Ol Man 70's5/10/2005 c1 
20Penny so Pretty
well an update on old man 70s! we actually went inside the back room. it was quite eerie but nothing was there cept an old fan and... i cant remember what else. but the attic was even scarier! we boosted ourselves up to peek inside and there was a blanket hanging from the roof almost like a room divider or somethin... but yea i thought id just update
20Penny so Prettywell an update on old man 70s! we actually went inside the back room. it was quite eerie but nothing was there cept an old fan and... i cant remember what else. but the attic was even scarier! we boosted ourselves up to peek inside and there was a blanket hanging from the roof almost like a room divider or somethin... but yea i thought id just update
3/15/2005 c1 12BlackFeatherLintu
Hey Biss, how are you? pretty kewl story here, its simple but true (if ya get wat im sayin) continue please! I've posted a new story, "Run" if ya wanna check that out, too...R&R! cya!
12BlackFeatherLintuHey Biss, how are you? pretty kewl story here, its simple but true (if ya get wat im sayin) continue please! I've posted a new story, "Run" if ya wanna check that out, too...R&R! cya!
3/15/2005 c1 4Carradine
Sorry this isn't a review, but it's "Le Louvre." There's an R and "de" isn't the in French.
4CarradineSorry this isn't a review, but it's "Le Louvre." There's an R and "de" isn't the in French.
3/2/2005 c1 Erin
I love it Biss! When i read the story, it was like reliving it all over again! I was on the edge of my seat! Haha! Well we all certainly find something fun to do...no matter what! How awesome are we? Word up to my Dogg Food Gangstas! Love you!
I love it Biss! When i read the story, it was like reliving it all over again! I was on the edge of my seat! Haha! Well we all certainly find something fun to do...no matter what! How awesome are we? Word up to my Dogg Food Gangstas! Love you!
2/27/2005 c1 my blatter is still pretty full
nice biss. very very nice. the way you put it its really scary thinkin back on it. whoa dag. im gettin the jibblies thinkin bout it. here they come again, jib, jib. phew. that was a close one wasnt it biss. WOOT!. luv ya,julia
nice biss. very very nice. the way you put it its really scary thinkin back on it. whoa dag. im gettin the jibblies thinkin bout it. here they come again, jib, jib. phew. that was a close one wasnt it biss. WOOT!. luv ya,julia
2/26/2005 c1 4False Advertisement
Hello, My name is Katelyn. I had gotten a review from you months ago (Midnight Iris) and you had asked me to read and review something of yours. I'm really glad you asked me to read, because I liked this alot.I think you should definitely keep going with this, or expand on it somehow. I found the whole concept of fear amazing in this story, however I just want you to know that the things that don't scare us are the things we can't see.Adding the shards of glass was creative though, and the caving ofthe roof was well put. I think perhaps it would have been more effective if you personalized the four girls a little bit more, giving them distinct features, thoughts and personalities, so the story would have been a bit more real, but the way you captured everything was nicely put. Thank you for reviewing and referring me!Katelyn
4False AdvertisementHello, My name is Katelyn. I had gotten a review from you months ago (Midnight Iris) and you had asked me to read and review something of yours. I'm really glad you asked me to read, because I liked this alot.I think you should definitely keep going with this, or expand on it somehow. I found the whole concept of fear amazing in this story, however I just want you to know that the things that don't scare us are the things we can't see.Adding the shards of glass was creative though, and the caving ofthe roof was well put. I think perhaps it would have been more effective if you personalized the four girls a little bit more, giving them distinct features, thoughts and personalities, so the story would have been a bit more real, but the way you captured everything was nicely put. Thank you for reviewing and referring me!Katelyn
2/23/2005 c1 3melody mama
Oh my goodness, just reading this freeked me out. I don't believe in the supernatural stuff at all, but the idea that some crazy axe murderer could be lurking in that old house would creep me out. I wouldn't go in. I know I wouldn't. I'm a loser like that. Great write. Very descriptive, it definitely pulled me in. Keep writing.
3melody mamaOh my goodness, just reading this freeked me out. I don't believe in the supernatural stuff at all, but the idea that some crazy axe murderer could be lurking in that old house would creep me out. I wouldn't go in. I know I wouldn't. I'm a loser like that. Great write. Very descriptive, it definitely pulled me in. Keep writing.