for Operation: Dessert Storm6/5/2005 c1 G-Go
OK, Loved this. Absolutely loved this. The title and the final line hurt, because that's what good puns do. They hurt. But I loved the idea of kids planning an operation to steal a dessert cart.
The writing is excellent, of course, and the overall concept is even better.Loved it.
OK, Loved this. Absolutely loved this. The title and the final line hurt, because that's what good puns do. They hurt. But I loved the idea of kids planning an operation to steal a dessert cart.
The writing is excellent, of course, and the overall concept is even better.Loved it.
2/21/2005 c1 
5fantasy-star
I like this story also. ^_^ and the title is very catchy I must say. Thanks for reviewing my story. I appreciate the comments that you gave. It would help me improve. keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your updates. :)
5fantasy-starI like this story also. ^_^ and the title is very catchy I must say. Thanks for reviewing my story. I appreciate the comments that you gave. It would help me improve. keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your updates. :)