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2/26/2005 c1 29Kellandra
well done. powerful, beautiful
2/22/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Interesting. Very emotional and well put. 4th line is my favorite. Great job.
2/21/2005 c1 WarriorHeart
damn do i get that! great writing... that's really all i can say.
2/21/2005 c1 4SilverAndFlames
Very powerful

Beautiful in a strange way...
2/21/2005 c1 80Visions of Harmony
Hey! Tis me again, back from the land of too-lazy-to-review!

This an amazing poem hun, really brilliant! I love the way you used italics, really brings out the reality of the poem, rather than it being just fiddly words...if that makes sense...? I don't know, it did in my head! But then a lot of things make sense in my head that don't when put anywhere else!

Anyhow, amazing poem!

Love Rozie x x x
2/21/2005 c1 Ahemait
nice, deep and very strong poem. i like how you used the italics in to to empathesize your point. great poem
2/21/2005 c1 61Stories-have-souls
Good poem, and I like the imagery.

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