for The Royal Library of Ior3/4/2005 c3 
9Fat-Squirrel
Wow :D Nice work... the only part where I had to stop and try to puzzle out a sentence was the "...and so she careered backwards and knocked the figure behind her over, sending it sprawling on the floor.". I can't really picture this... how can someone knock over someone backwards by accident, without seeing him?
9Fat-SquirrelWow :D Nice work... the only part where I had to stop and try to puzzle out a sentence was the "...and so she careered backwards and knocked the figure behind her over, sending it sprawling on the floor.". I can't really picture this... how can someone knock over someone backwards by accident, without seeing him?
2/21/2005 c1 Free Puppy
Wow. Really discriptive - i could see the royal library perfectly in my mind. I want to fall into your story and be inside that library! Keep writing. you are awesome!
Wow. Really discriptive - i could see the royal library perfectly in my mind. I want to fall into your story and be inside that library! Keep writing. you are awesome!