for The Governess and the Gentleman11/12/2014 c6 Random
This story is to much like Jane Eyre. I still like it though.
This story is to much like Jane Eyre. I still like it though.
12/23/2010 c24 
5christinaxxyo
Honestly, I thought the story moved a little too fast but I still really like the plot and the characters. You did a good job on finishing this :)
5christinaxxyoHonestly, I thought the story moved a little too fast but I still really like the plot and the characters. You did a good job on finishing this :)
4/28/2010 c1 bubublacz
This sounds interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Lovely to see, that she's not dainty, too!
This sounds interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Lovely to see, that she's not dainty, too!
3/24/2008 c24 8Written
what a sweet story!
I feel like you may have rushed it in parts with more telling than showing, and there was the purple prose at the very start that was somewhat noticeable (which, I suppose, was too MUCH showing?).
Nevertheless, you pulled through and for the majority of the time your prose was natural and clear, and I had a good image in my head of what was going on. This is one of the better stories I've read on this site, to be honest. I think it was a good gesture how you didn't have her accept the proposal right away; it shows good sense.
I think you've done a lovely job! good work :)
8Writtenwhat a sweet story!
I feel like you may have rushed it in parts with more telling than showing, and there was the purple prose at the very start that was somewhat noticeable (which, I suppose, was too MUCH showing?).
Nevertheless, you pulled through and for the majority of the time your prose was natural and clear, and I had a good image in my head of what was going on. This is one of the better stories I've read on this site, to be honest. I think it was a good gesture how you didn't have her accept the proposal right away; it shows good sense.
I think you've done a lovely job! good work :)
3/23/2008 c14 Written
it's going wonderfully so far! can't wait to read more :) hope it all ends well.
it's going wonderfully so far! can't wait to read more :) hope it all ends well.
3/23/2008 c1 Written
what a lovely story! you had a bit too much purple prose at the start, but you got me by the end. I can't wait to read more.
what a lovely story! you had a bit too much purple prose at the start, but you got me by the end. I can't wait to read more.
1/8/2008 c24 Winterbirdie
very good story! =D i love reading stories that are well developed and just great!
Thanks so much!
very good story! =D i love reading stories that are well developed and just great!
Thanks so much!
10/31/2007 c16 cinnamon-24
I "might" if ...introduces herself!
hehehe!
I like Andrew... do set him up with someone nice won't you
I "might" if ...introduces herself!
hehehe!
I like Andrew... do set him up with someone nice won't you