for All I ever wanted6/23/2005 c1 
25Risto
knowing what you want is sometimes as bad as not knowing what u need... what u need is more important than any want... a need is the most powerful thing...other than love of course
25Ristoknowing what you want is sometimes as bad as not knowing what u need... what u need is more important than any want... a need is the most powerful thing...other than love of course
5/26/2005 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
ahh! reveiws are too short to explain how much i relate to this! wow... just... wow... (are there any other words i can use to describe poems this good? all the other ones seem so old and... impotent... like they've been worn down.) I wish to say this with the meaning the words should have originally. "Brilliant, Loving, Deep, Awesome"
88Icthoid Matro Coselosahh! reveiws are too short to explain how much i relate to this! wow... just... wow... (are there any other words i can use to describe poems this good? all the other ones seem so old and... impotent... like they've been worn down.) I wish to say this with the meaning the words should have originally. "Brilliant, Loving, Deep, Awesome"
4/4/2005 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Heya,
This poem has a really nice flow and rhythm to it and I admire the feeling and depth you've managaed to write into it. It's very very good and my only criticism is you missed a space in between so and blind. Lol, and this shows just how amazing the poem is that your only criticism is a missed spacing!
Fantastic.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesHeya,
This poem has a really nice flow and rhythm to it and I admire the feeling and depth you've managaed to write into it. It's very very good and my only criticism is you missed a space in between so and blind. Lol, and this shows just how amazing the poem is that your only criticism is a missed spacing!
Fantastic.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
3/8/2005 c1 8songofthesiren
love it! i've often felt this way about a guy that i like but he doesn't know it yet... ~love is all you need~
8songofthesirenlove it! i've often felt this way about a guy that i like but he doesn't know it yet... ~love is all you need~
2/23/2005 c1 12Fae Hines
Must say, I like this one better than 'Poisoned Heart' It's very descriptive, I can feel what you're saying while I read it. -Sammie (S'mie)
12Fae HinesMust say, I like this one better than 'Poisoned Heart' It's very descriptive, I can feel what you're saying while I read it. -Sammie (S'mie)
2/23/2005 c1 94born-again
I thought it was creepy that this describes life at the moment, doubly so when i read that another person (earlier review) thought this as well! I think the first three lines are really nice.
94born-againI thought it was creepy that this describes life at the moment, doubly so when i read that another person (earlier review) thought this as well! I think the first three lines are really nice.
2/22/2005 c1 339awake through the years
you got your meaning across very well. i personally can very well connect with this poem, so it was nice to read. it's a tiny bit choppy, but i don't think that interrupts the flow too much. i guess i shouldn't even be pointing it out because i write like that a lot too. XD i liked it a lot though.
339awake through the yearsyou got your meaning across very well. i personally can very well connect with this poem, so it was nice to read. it's a tiny bit choppy, but i don't think that interrupts the flow too much. i guess i shouldn't even be pointing it out because i write like that a lot too. XD i liked it a lot though.
2/22/2005 c1 3somefreakylooknchick
hmm.. don't think I can really relate.. but this is pretty cool. Oh wait, I have felt this way. Makes me feel stupid.. anyways.. good job. I like this
3somefreakylooknchickhmm.. don't think I can really relate.. but this is pretty cool. Oh wait, I have felt this way. Makes me feel stupid.. anyways.. good job. I like this
2/22/2005 c1 7The System Mother
^_^ That's so cute. And at the same way, a little sad. But good nevertheless ^_^ (What is with those, anyways?) *giggles*
Thanks for the review!
7The System Mother^_^ That's so cute. And at the same way, a little sad. But good nevertheless ^_^ (What is with those, anyways?) *giggles*
Thanks for the review!
2/22/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I like how you end this the same way that you started it. I like the use of reflection and everything. Good job. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaI like how you end this the same way that you started it. I like the use of reflection and everything. Good job. QueenVixta