
1/11/2006 c1 yupyup
interesting going away only to come home again yupyup or at least find ur home i think that is interesting. good job yupyup yupyup
interesting going away only to come home again yupyup or at least find ur home i think that is interesting. good job yupyup yupyup
7/31/2005 c1 PoohBear99
Powerful. i think that about sums up this poem. your right too. you go away only to come home again.
Powerful. i think that about sums up this poem. your right too. you go away only to come home again.
5/24/2005 c1
11EldestMushroom
i love this one! i cant even begin to explain how but your last lines seem to fit me. the words just seem to blend together perfectly. great job!

i love this one! i cant even begin to explain how but your last lines seem to fit me. the words just seem to blend together perfectly. great job!
4/14/2005 c1 Kim
explain this one to me, because I can't quite understand what you are talking about
explain this one to me, because I can't quite understand what you are talking about
2/22/2005 c1
16Wing Chant
Great work, yet again! I love the title of the poem, it just blends into the rest of your poem so gracefully. Keep on writing,
loserz. ;)

Great work, yet again! I love the title of the poem, it just blends into the rest of your poem so gracefully. Keep on writing,
loserz. ;)