
6/5/2006 c1
80magnusthewolf
this is very creative, well written, and beautiful. great choice of words, descriptions, and anaolgies. also, i could even realte to this, so its more kodus for you! great job! i really like this!

this is very creative, well written, and beautiful. great choice of words, descriptions, and anaolgies. also, i could even realte to this, so its more kodus for you! great job! i really like this!
3/22/2005 c1
10Kathryn Paris
WOW! I wish I could write something like that...A narrative poem... Of sorts I'm guessing very well done...and written. *claps* please continue I wish to see more of your work...
plus more to "the Apartment" as well...I agree with others...it needs more ideas once you have some...

WOW! I wish I could write something like that...A narrative poem... Of sorts I'm guessing very well done...and written. *claps* please continue I wish to see more of your work...
plus more to "the Apartment" as well...I agree with others...it needs more ideas once you have some...