
8/21/2006 c22 Eva Lilac
Wow. Really. I really like this story, I do. It's nice how you switch POVs to show what other characters think. Keep up the good work!
Wow. Really. I really like this story, I do. It's nice how you switch POVs to show what other characters think. Keep up the good work!
4/15/2006 c22 Racchel
I love this story. But, it seems as though you havent updated in a year? Please contine it...I have read time travel fiction and most are dumb. This one is actually a good read.
I love this story. But, it seems as though you havent updated in a year? Please contine it...I have read time travel fiction and most are dumb. This one is actually a good read.
2/25/2006 c22 Lynn
So sad to see that this story has not been updated in a long time! You are a great storyteller with some fascinating plotlines! It's a very original take, too, on time travel. I had to laugh at the thought of Macey climbing in pink sequin flipflops-that would be pretty uncomfortable! And there are so many secrets in this story to keep the reader intrigued, and they unfold at a great pace. Hope you may consider continuing this!
So sad to see that this story has not been updated in a long time! You are a great storyteller with some fascinating plotlines! It's a very original take, too, on time travel. I had to laugh at the thought of Macey climbing in pink sequin flipflops-that would be pretty uncomfortable! And there are so many secrets in this story to keep the reader intrigued, and they unfold at a great pace. Hope you may consider continuing this!
12/15/2005 c22 ReiJ
read all the chapters in one night...very well written and full of suspense to keep the reader hanging...please update soon.^^
read all the chapters in one night...very well written and full of suspense to keep the reader hanging...please update soon.^^
10/25/2005 c22 starrywitch
come on just finish the story, i am dying of suspense and it has meen 5 months since the last chapter!
come on just finish the story, i am dying of suspense and it has meen 5 months since the last chapter!
8/31/2005 c22
4Wisher
Oo, oo, this is REALLY INTERESTING!I love Time travel stories, really, I do. Anyway. Just wondering . . . are you completely certain that all your information about 'Indian Braves' and the like is correct? Cos, I don't mean to be all high and mighty and act as though I know what I'm talking about, because I don't, but . . . Aren't you kinda stereotyping with the whole they all have Mohawks? Or something?Agh, I don't know. Ignore me. I mean no offense. And I truly love this story, it is awesome!Bye,Wisher

Oo, oo, this is REALLY INTERESTING!I love Time travel stories, really, I do. Anyway. Just wondering . . . are you completely certain that all your information about 'Indian Braves' and the like is correct? Cos, I don't mean to be all high and mighty and act as though I know what I'm talking about, because I don't, but . . . Aren't you kinda stereotyping with the whole they all have Mohawks? Or something?Agh, I don't know. Ignore me. I mean no offense. And I truly love this story, it is awesome!Bye,Wisher
6/17/2005 c22
11Treg
please update soon. i like this story. please update. or i will kick your ass! lol jk, jk.

please update soon. i like this story. please update. or i will kick your ass! lol jk, jk.
5/25/2005 c22 T A Stewart
Iliked this. I don't like Christa, but I feel sorry for Macey with that Blaire. Are Billy and Chandra gonna get together. I hope so. Please update.PeaceTanika
Iliked this. I don't like Christa, but I feel sorry for Macey with that Blaire. Are Billy and Chandra gonna get together. I hope so. Please update.PeaceTanika
5/23/2005 c22
1floozie in the jacuzzi
I don't really like anything sci-fi or supernatural, but this story ROCKS.
Update soon. =)

I don't really like anything sci-fi or supernatural, but this story ROCKS.
Update soon. =)
5/23/2005 c22
10JojoAnn
"This is wonderful." Lauren, the coolest girl reading the story said. Hahaha. It's great and much more exciting.

"This is wonderful." Lauren, the coolest girl reading the story said. Hahaha. It's great and much more exciting.
5/5/2005 c3
17Miss Megan
This story's awesome! It took me forever to decide which of your stories to read because they all looked so good (my limit lately has been 1 story per author until i finish one otherwise i get confused lol) but anyway im rambling good story i like it a lot! I don't like Christa tho she needs to like..be nicer. lol.

This story's awesome! It took me forever to decide which of your stories to read because they all looked so good (my limit lately has been 1 story per author until i finish one otherwise i get confused lol) but anyway im rambling good story i like it a lot! I don't like Christa tho she needs to like..be nicer. lol.