
10/5/2007 c1
613DiaRose
Ooh, that's really quite scary. Very nice...I was just watching that 1408 movie, so I'm a bit shaken up already, but I don't think that has much to do with it, this really puts some bone-chilling images in my head. Good job!
Love,
~Dia

Ooh, that's really quite scary. Very nice...I was just watching that 1408 movie, so I'm a bit shaken up already, but I don't think that has much to do with it, this really puts some bone-chilling images in my head. Good job!
Love,
~Dia
9/23/2006 c1
12Panicking With Hesitation
i deleted the stories you reviewed an hour ago before checking my e-mail... because i didn't know i had reviews on them and i thought they sucked...
so now im hitting myself over the head bc i love reviews! : )
stupid me...stupid, stupid me... lol
anyway- I like this... the second to the last line: Sharper than a Toy.. i like that! :)

i deleted the stories you reviewed an hour ago before checking my e-mail... because i didn't know i had reviews on them and i thought they sucked...
so now im hitting myself over the head bc i love reviews! : )
stupid me...stupid, stupid me... lol
anyway- I like this... the second to the last line: Sharper than a Toy.. i like that! :)
8/13/2006 c1
31Leaving Here
i like the theme of this.
i love: there is nothing to gain.
very to the point. i like it.

i like the theme of this.
i love: there is nothing to gain.
very to the point. i like it.
11/3/2005 c1
3Broken doll on a dirty shelf
Hm. This has sucha twisted background. The four lines really did it for me though, I love the way you described the 'weapon'. Excellent.
Harlequin~Please fix me...

Hm. This has sucha twisted background. The four lines really did it for me though, I love the way you described the 'weapon'. Excellent.
Harlequin~Please fix me...
9/14/2005 c1
21sirkupo
I love the title... Blood of the night... It attracted me to this poem... You were able to kee a constant emotion throughout the piece so.. great job! I liked this one..
~Kupo~

I love the title... Blood of the night... It attracted me to this poem... You were able to kee a constant emotion throughout the piece so.. great job! I liked this one..
~Kupo~
9/12/2005 c1
109ADSpencer
Wonderful! This is awesome. . . You should put it in front of a fantasy story...

Wonderful! This is awesome. . . You should put it in front of a fantasy story...
8/20/2005 c1 Adam
One of my favorites. I love the feel i get when it reaches the last line. Great job.
One of my favorites. I love the feel i get when it reaches the last line. Great job.
6/3/2005 c1 Ra Miew
WOW! You have such talent at writing poetry... I wish I knew how to write poetry *sigh* I never unederstood why, but i'm only able to come up with a poem in my sleep, and then when I wake up, i forget the lines! I have such bad luck... Anyways,keep up the good... No, awesome, work!
WOW! You have such talent at writing poetry... I wish I knew how to write poetry *sigh* I never unederstood why, but i'm only able to come up with a poem in my sleep, and then when I wake up, i forget the lines! I have such bad luck... Anyways,keep up the good... No, awesome, work!
5/8/2005 c1 HeeHee
Simply Brilliant. Great Flow Of Words. I Love It.
Simply Brilliant. Great Flow Of Words. I Love It.