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2/4/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
wow this has actually been on my favourites list for a millenia but i have never reviewed it :S. i think the reason may be that i am completely incapable of expressing the fucking AWE. i love this poem. i do, and i cannot explain it. instead, i will quote back at you in the vain but crystalline hope that, rereading them, you will understand the insane and unreserved genius of your work. all you work.

(you told me – four-letter wordskill dandelions -)

i don’t know how i fit into this picture

as i am so quiet lately.

but you see,

i own this gun

and i named her lily.

but you know what – i’m unhinged and i just think

you don’t even deserve to be a proper noun.

(i suppose i don’t mean that)

thank you. so much.
3/6/2005 c1 69this is britt
I'd eat it if I could. I'm belching now from the glory of it all. The world needs you and your writing right now!
2/27/2005 c1 49greenbanana
this poem is on my faves now! and so are you! absolutely awesomely awesome! so so so so so good i can't even say how good it is...

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