for Happy Valentine's Day2/26/2005 c1 
75Aidian Miller
Very nice. I liked it a lot. Had this been posted on Valentine's day, I think I'd have had a seizure from the gooey love that pours from it. (I was rather emotional that day, because my boyfriend was wonderful to me on our date.) I have to wonder if this was written for a special someone. I did enjoy how everything was detailed, so that it painted out a scene in front of us, rather than just made it vague and relate to everything. I loved the 'Cause it takes blood to gain anything great' line. Very true, very passionate. It almost sounds childishly hopeful, because of the first word, which I don't know if it was intended or not. But either way, it's all good. No real constructive criticism except for the rhyme scheme confused me when it changed at random. But other than that, it's very, very well done. And I think I shall add it to my Favorite's list.
75Aidian MillerVery nice. I liked it a lot. Had this been posted on Valentine's day, I think I'd have had a seizure from the gooey love that pours from it. (I was rather emotional that day, because my boyfriend was wonderful to me on our date.) I have to wonder if this was written for a special someone. I did enjoy how everything was detailed, so that it painted out a scene in front of us, rather than just made it vague and relate to everything. I loved the 'Cause it takes blood to gain anything great' line. Very true, very passionate. It almost sounds childishly hopeful, because of the first word, which I don't know if it was intended or not. But either way, it's all good. No real constructive criticism except for the rhyme scheme confused me when it changed at random. But other than that, it's very, very well done. And I think I shall add it to my Favorite's list.