for Not making the first move this time4/19/2005 c1 
7meep2creep
you call this a poem i call it fancy but you are a cupcake on the top of my grandpappys head which he will eat for dessert and you smell like sassafrass
7meep2creepyou call this a poem i call it fancy but you are a cupcake on the top of my grandpappys head which he will eat for dessert and you smell like sassafrass
3/15/2005 c1 Zombie Zak
Awh...Love sucks...pretty poem. Btw, thanks for the review, much appreciated. And what I meant in the poem was that sometimes it's like [zeke] is so much younger than I (he's really older). once again, good poem and thanks!
Awh...Love sucks...pretty poem. Btw, thanks for the review, much appreciated. And what I meant in the poem was that sometimes it's like [zeke] is so much younger than I (he's really older). once again, good poem and thanks!
3/13/2005 c1 Bloodtide
why not
why not
3/10/2005 c1 1Vocalisa
I definitely know what you mean by not wanting to bring other people down- it's a habit of mine as well.Nice job, and thanks for the review.
1VocalisaI definitely know what you mean by not wanting to bring other people down- it's a habit of mine as well.Nice job, and thanks for the review.
3/9/2005 c1 15Chobit Kris
I know the feeling. I felt the same way about boyfriend Im with now, and we went out but I asked him, nad I always had to say I love you first and I was doing all hte work, so i gave up, i didn't dump him, but I just tried not to cry or force myself on him, but then later he saw how upset I was and he gave me my very first kiss and it was his too and he said he loved me for the first time without me saying so, I even wrote a poem about it, lol, but this is like the prequal to it, its great, sorry I just shared a story of my life, but the poem is very good and I understand the feeling completely
15Chobit KrisI know the feeling. I felt the same way about boyfriend Im with now, and we went out but I asked him, nad I always had to say I love you first and I was doing all hte work, so i gave up, i didn't dump him, but I just tried not to cry or force myself on him, but then later he saw how upset I was and he gave me my very first kiss and it was his too and he said he loved me for the first time without me saying so, I even wrote a poem about it, lol, but this is like the prequal to it, its great, sorry I just shared a story of my life, but the poem is very good and I understand the feeling completely
3/4/2005 c1 Galadh Niniel
Touching, you get across these feelings really well. It can hurt to wait for someone to tell/ show they care, but perhaps they are not even aware that one is waiting. I find it hard not to make the first move, but sometimes when I am hurt and yearning for a sign of affection I wait for the other person to do it, even though part of me wants to just rush to them and tell them in tears how much they mean to me. Anyway, good poem.
Touching, you get across these feelings really well. It can hurt to wait for someone to tell/ show they care, but perhaps they are not even aware that one is waiting. I find it hard not to make the first move, but sometimes when I am hurt and yearning for a sign of affection I wait for the other person to do it, even though part of me wants to just rush to them and tell them in tears how much they mean to me. Anyway, good poem.
3/3/2005 c1 95beti213
Hah... I know exactly what you mean... the only thing I would do is to not overuse "make a move" because it's in the title, and there are many more eloquent phrases for it... otherwise, great poem and I should take it as my mantra :)
95beti213Hah... I know exactly what you mean... the only thing I would do is to not overuse "make a move" because it's in the title, and there are many more eloquent phrases for it... otherwise, great poem and I should take it as my mantra :)
2/28/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
i dont think its demanding.. I like it a lot.. nice repition.. it sounds more desperate than demanding.. thanks for your review!
612simpleplan13i dont think its demanding.. I like it a lot.. nice repition.. it sounds more desperate than demanding.. thanks for your review!