
7/19/2010 c4 Fruitcastle250
Please write more this sounds really good.
Please write more this sounds really good.
7/27/2005 c3 i cant be bothered to sign in
i love it! update soon! i cant wait to see what happens next!
i love it! update soon! i cant wait to see what happens next!
6/15/2005 c1 Shaina
Oh NO! I dont wanna be rapped! Ouch ouch ouch
okay this is very freakish.. my name and uh the guy i like's name is in here.. ahaha
Oh NO! I dont wanna be rapped! Ouch ouch ouch
okay this is very freakish.. my name and uh the guy i like's name is in here.. ahaha
4/10/2005 c3 WriteBookworm
i think that your story is coming out really well. you might want to add a little more detail, to emphasize certain points (just a suggestion).
i think that your story is coming out really well. you might want to add a little more detail, to emphasize certain points (just a suggestion).